How to Write Fantasy Character Arcs Better than 99% of Writers
Zusammenfassung
TLDRThis video explores the elements that make fantasy characters memorable and engaging, with an emphasis on their character arcs. It explains that the allure of fantasy characters lies in their personal struggles, changes, and transformations over time, rather than the magical abilities or fantastical worlds they inhabit. The key to a compelling character is their arc, a metaphor for real-life experiences and growth. The video identifies common mistakes new fantasy writers make, such as creating unbelievable or forced character changes, and emphasizes the integration of character arcs with plot and theme. It discusses the three primary types of character arcs: positive change, negative arcs, and flat arcs, detailing how each type is structured and exemplified with well-known characters like Bilbo Baggins, Ned Stark, and others. The role of theme is highlighted as central to enriching character transformation, aligning the character’s truth with the story's moral question. The video also stresses the importance of outlining character arcs for clarity and cohesion across a series, using a structured approach like the nine-point story structure to harmonize character arcs with overall plot developments.
Mitbringsel
- 💡 Character Arcs: Focus on the transformation and struggles of fantasy characters, not just their magical abilities.
- 🚫 Common Mistakes: Avoid forced changes and ensure character arcs are believable and integrated with the plot.
- 🔄 Types of Arcs: Understand and utilize positive, negative, and flat character arcs in your writing.
- 📚 Outlining: Plan character arcs to ensure cohesive and engaging progressions and transformations.
- 🎭 Theme Integration: Align character arcs with the story's theme to create a resonant narrative.
- 🔍 Midpoint Revelation: Use it to shift characters from reactive to proactive, driving their story forward.
- 🧑🤝🧑 Reader Engagement: Establish characters' rooting interests to make readers care and invest emotionally.
- 📈 Series Structuring: Plan for character arcs to evolve meaningfully over multiple books.
- 🎼 Structure Benefits: Utilize structured methods like nine-point story structure for cohesive story development.
- ✍️ Practice and Feedback: Use aids like outlining boot camps to refine writing techniques and advance your skills.
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- 00:00:00 - 00:05:00
The speaker introduces the concept of fantasy characters being memorable due to their character arcs rather than their magical abilities or settings. They emphasize that a captivating character arc creates emotional investment in readers, transforming characters into three-dimensional people. The speaker surveyed 300 fantasy writers who struggle with believable character arcs and has developed a system to address these challenges based on their extensive experience in writing and coaching.
- 00:05:00 - 00:10:00
The speaker highlights five common mistakes new fantasy writers make with character arcs: lack of believability and realism, unsubtle demonstrations of change, lack of cohesion with plot and themes, making characters too unlikable initially, and lacking uniqueness and surprise in characters' journeys. They explain that plot and character are intertwined, exemplified through various archetypes and the need for subtlety and integration with the overall story.
- 00:10:00 - 00:15:00
Addressing the issue of character likability, the speaker suggests ensuring characters have redeemable traits to maintain reader interest, even if they start with flaws. They discuss the predictability of character arcs in fantasy, explaining that readers often anticipate familiar patterns and appreciate when the journey is surprising yet inevitable. The speaker uses examples like Harry Potter to illustrate fulfilling story promises while delivering unexpected details.
- 00:15:00 - 00:20:00
Introducing the three types of character arcs—positive, negative, and flat—the speaker explains each type with examples. Positive arcs depict character growth towards fulfillment, negative arcs show a character's downfall, and flat arcs demonstrate how a stable character affects the world around them. Examples include Bilbo Baggins (positive), Cole Shivers (negative), and Ned Stark (flat) to showcase different narrative outcomes.
- 00:20:00 - 00:25:00
The speaker outlines five core components of a character arc: the ghost (a past event shaping current behavior), the lie (a misconception stemming from the ghost), the want (an external goal linked to the lie), the need (an accurate realization overcoming the lie), and the truth (the lesson the character ultimately embraces). These elements are crucial in structuring believable character transitions.
- 00:25:00 - 00:30:00
Delving deeper into the components, the speaker discusses how the 'ghost' could be a positive or negative past event impacting the character's current trajectory. They address the formation of the 'lie' as a misguided belief, leading to flaws and fears. Examples of lies include beliefs of unworthiness or distrust. They emphasize the importance of world-building in reinforcing these beliefs and shaping character evolution.
- 00:30:00 - 00:35:00
The speaker explores the 'want,' an external desire often driven by the lie, and introduces the 'axis of desire' tool to help writers determine characters' goals and potential subplots. They then discuss the 'need,' the internal realization characters must have to overcome their lies, with potential archetypes for needs provided. The distinction between wants and needs is crucial for character development.
- 00:35:00 - 00:40:00
The speaker concludes the arc-building discussion by illustrating the 'truth,' the ultimate understanding that vanquishes the lie and fulfills the need. Truths provide resolution but can also introduce new questions for subsequent stories. Various examples of truths are given to inspire writers. The speaker credits the development of this structured approach to C.S. Lakin's book, while emphasizing their own adaptations.
- 00:40:00 - 00:45:00
For structuring positive, negative, and flat arcs, the speaker offers detailed patterns: positive arcs evolve from lie to truth, negative arcs descend from truth to lie, and flat arcs maintain truth while impacting the surroundings. They highlight Bilbo Baggins as an example of a positive arc, Cole Shivers for negative, and Ned Stark for flat, illustrating the varied nature of character journeys.
- 00:45:00 - 00:50:00
Discussing series arcs, the speaker outlines how characters can go through different arc types throughout a series, such as a positive arc followed by flat arcs, while emphasizing the importance of evolving challenges to avoid stagnation. These arcs can offer varying narratives while maintaining character continuity and development, as exemplified by series like 'The Way of Kings' and 'Dune.'
- 00:50:00 - 00:55:00
The speaker transitions to how character arcs tie into story structure, recommending their own nine-point story structure. They highlight the importance of outlining character arcs early, which prevents structural issues and enables creativity within the framework. The speaker shares their personal evolution as a writer and the benefits of their structured approach developed over 12 years and four published novels.
- 00:55:00 - 01:00:00
The talk discusses integrating character arcs into plots using their nine-point structure, ensuring cohesion between arcs and story events. They illustrate each structural point—from the hook to the closing image—with examples from works such as 'The Hobbit,' 'Best Served Cold,' and 'A Game of Thrones,' showing how each phase reflects character growth and thematic development.
- 01:00:00 - 01:05:00
Regarding the 'hook,' the speaker advises starting with a unique characteristic moment, establishing characters' flaws or desires, and introducing rooting interests to engage readers. They offer five ways to achieve this: sympathy, skill, personality, progression, and a worthy cause, all illustrated with examples like Harry Potter and Indiana Jones, reinforcing the need for a compelling start.
- 01:05:00 - 01:12:03
The speaker details each story point in their nine-point structure, explaining how these points serve the character's arc, such as the inciting incident, midpoint revelation, and climax. They emphasize the balance between action and internal growth, using examples to show how protagonists face their ghosts, lie, and truth throughout the narrative, culminating in their final transformation or realization.
Mind Map
Häufig gestellte Fragen
What is the main focus when creating a memorable fantasy character?
The main focus is on the character's arc of struggle, change, and transformation, rather than merely their magical abilities or fantastical worlds.
What are common mistakes new writers make with character arcs?
Common mistakes include lack of believability, being too on-the-nose with character changes, lack of cohesion with plot and theme, characters that are too unlikable at the start, and lack of uniqueness and surprise.
How many types of character arcs are discussed?
Three types of character arcs are discussed: positive change arcs, negative arcs, and flat arcs.
What's a negative character arc?
A negative character arc depicts a character's downfall or descent, where they start with positive traits or beliefs but eventually embrace their lies and temptations, leading to a tragic end.
What is a flat arc?
In a flat arc, the character does not change significantly; rather, they impact the world and others around them, often seen in serialized stories.
What role does theme play in character arcs?
Theme is crucial as it ties into the character’s truth, creating a morally and emotionally resonant story. It’s the moral argument explored through character transformations.
Why is outlining character arcs beneficial?
Outlining helps ensure structural integrity, allowing authors to plan significant transformations and avoid common pitfalls upfront, while maintaining creativity.
How can character arcs integrate with plot?
Character arcs integrate with plot through structured story outlines, such as a nine-point story structure, ensuring cohesive development and engagement.
What is the significance of the climax in a character arc?
The climax is significant because it's where the truth or the lie triumphs in the character’s journey, resolving their core conflicts.
How can character arcs be structured across a series?
Character arcs in a series can evolve in various ways, such as maintaining a flat arc for continuity, or shifting from positive to negative arcs in sequential books for dynamic development.
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- 00:00:00I want you to think about the best
- 00:00:02fantasy characters that you've ever read
- 00:00:04what makes them so memorable relatable
- 00:00:06and interesting it's not the magic they
- 00:00:08wield it's not the worlds they explore
- 00:00:10it's the process of struggle and change
- 00:00:13and transformation we see them go
- 00:00:15through over the course of a story in
- 00:00:17other words it is their character Arc
- 00:00:19because without a compelling character
- 00:00:20Arc even the most Fantastical worlds
- 00:00:22feel flat and boring and that is because
- 00:00:24a well-written character Arc is a
- 00:00:26metaphor for life and how you and I are
- 00:00:28also forced to evolve and change as we
- 00:00:30go through our own Journeys and our own
- 00:00:32experiences so when you can write a
- 00:00:33captivating character Arc in your own
- 00:00:35fantasy novel readers are going to have
- 00:00:36an insane amount of emotional investment
- 00:00:39in your story they're going to be
- 00:00:40laughing alongside your characters
- 00:00:41they're going to be crying alongside
- 00:00:43your characters they're not going to be
- 00:00:44able to stop reading about their
- 00:00:45adventures and when they are finally
- 00:00:47finished they'll be recommending your
- 00:00:48book to all of their friends because for
- 00:00:50them your characters no longer feel like
- 00:00:53characters they feel like real unique
- 00:00:55three-dimensional people now don't get
- 00:00:57me wrong that is a hard goal to hit I
- 00:00:59surveyed over 300 fantasy writers in
- 00:01:01preparation for this video and a lot of
- 00:01:03you told me that you struggle to write
- 00:01:04character arcs that feel believable show
- 00:01:07growth in a nuanced way and integrate
- 00:01:10cohesively with your plot theme and
- 00:01:12Other Side characters now I've built a
- 00:01:14lot of character arcs in my four
- 00:01:15published fantasy novels and in my video
- 00:01:17game as well and I've personally heard
- 00:01:1923 fantasy writers develop their
- 00:01:21character arcs either when I was editing
- 00:01:23their books as a client or when I was
- 00:01:24helping them outline their books in my
- 00:01:26fantasy outlining boot camp and that's
- 00:01:27not to mention the 130 plus story
- 00:01:29coaching calls I've done at this point
- 00:01:31to help writers further refine their
- 00:01:33novels and from all this experience I've
- 00:01:34built a system for writing character
- 00:01:36arcs which I'm going to share with you
- 00:01:37in this video so I really suggest that
- 00:01:39you take notes as we go through this
- 00:01:40because a lot of the things I'm sharing
- 00:01:42with you here are lessons and approaches
- 00:01:44that I've shared with clients who have
- 00:01:45paid me thousands of dollars to learn
- 00:01:46this stuff this is not the only way to
- 00:01:48do it it is just the way that I do it
- 00:01:50after 12 years of practice as a writer
- 00:01:52and I've also seen it produce incredible
- 00:01:54results for my clients as well so I
- 00:01:56think if you go through this whole video
- 00:01:57and take notes along the way it will do
- 00:01:59the same for you as well and the place
- 00:02:01we need to begin is actually by looking
- 00:02:02at the common character Arc mistakes
- 00:02:04that new fantasy writers often make I've
- 00:02:06identified five of these in particular
- 00:02:08and the first one is just this lack of
- 00:02:10believability and realism so this comes
- 00:02:13across when a character changes in a way
- 00:02:14that feels too rapid and too fast or
- 00:02:17when the change doesn't feel realistic
- 00:02:19maybe you have someone who's sort of
- 00:02:20been a villain up until this point and
- 00:02:22then the character says one line of
- 00:02:23dialogue to them and they instantly flip
- 00:02:25around and now they're the good guy of
- 00:02:27course you can do that really well but
- 00:02:28you've got to make sure it feels like it
- 00:02:30isn't just out of the blue and then the
- 00:02:32other big thing that impacts the
- 00:02:33believability and realism of your
- 00:02:35character change is when it just feels
- 00:02:37like it was forced because the plot
- 00:02:38needed it rather than feeling like a
- 00:02:41organic result of a character's
- 00:02:43motivations and life experiences up into
- 00:02:45that point the second mistake is UNS
- 00:02:47subtle demonstrations of change so this
- 00:02:50usually comes across when you have
- 00:02:52characters saying very on the- noose
- 00:02:54pieces of dialogue like oh I used to be
- 00:02:56a horrible person but now I've realized
- 00:02:58that love and affection and kittens are
- 00:03:00the best thing ever so you really want
- 00:03:03to avoid doing this you want to be
- 00:03:04subtle and show characters changing
- 00:03:07preferably through their actions and not
- 00:03:09just through these very on the- noose
- 00:03:11pieces of dialogue the third common
- 00:03:13character Arc mistake is when you don't
- 00:03:14have any cohesion with your story's plot
- 00:03:17theme and other characters there is this
- 00:03:19huge misconception in writing that I see
- 00:03:21all the time which is that you either
- 00:03:23have a plot driven story or you have a
- 00:03:25character driven story and I think that
- 00:03:26distinction is utterly foolish and it's
- 00:03:29going to be really hindering to you if
- 00:03:30you want to write a great fantasy novel
- 00:03:32The reason for that is that plot is
- 00:03:34simply the actions that characters take
- 00:03:35in your novel and the only way we
- 00:03:37understand characters is by the actions
- 00:03:39they take I mean if you just think about
- 00:03:41it it's really hard to pick a Fantasy
- 00:03:43character from a book if you take any of
- 00:03:45the books on the bookshelf behind me
- 00:03:46here it's really hard for me to just
- 00:03:47extract a character from that book and
- 00:03:50explain that character without also
- 00:03:52explaining all the events and the
- 00:03:53context that surrounds them in other
- 00:03:55words you have to basically explain what
- 00:03:57they do in the story and what their role
- 00:03:58is in the story in order to get that
- 00:04:00character's personality and traits
- 00:04:02across and even if you aren't going to
- 00:04:04use the actual story itself to explain
- 00:04:06your character you're probably just
- 00:04:07going to explain what they did before
- 00:04:09the story their past their upbringing
- 00:04:11their childhood in other words their
- 00:04:13backstory which is essentially the same
- 00:04:15as plot but it's just plot that takes
- 00:04:17place before the pages of your novel so
- 00:04:19ultimately plot equals character and
- 00:04:21character equals plot and as we go
- 00:04:23through this video you're actually going
- 00:04:24to see this idea developed in much more
- 00:04:25detail and if you're not convinced right
- 00:04:27now I think by the end of the video you
- 00:04:29may have chck change to your mind
- 00:04:30because once you start to see the
- 00:04:31synthesis between these two things it
- 00:04:33hugely elevates the quality of your
- 00:04:35character arcs in your story the fourth
- 00:04:37common character AR mistake I see new
- 00:04:39writers making is making your characters
- 00:04:41too unlikable at the start so this is a
- 00:04:44tricky one here because often character
- 00:04:46arcs are about seeing people progress
- 00:04:48from one way of being to another way and
- 00:04:50if you're having a positive change Arc
- 00:04:52where a character goes from being a bad
- 00:04:54person to a better person you're
- 00:04:55probably going to show them in slightly
- 00:04:57unsympathetic ways at the beginning of
- 00:04:59your story for example maybe they're
- 00:05:00really selfish to begin or they're a bit
- 00:05:02arrogant at the start and over the
- 00:05:04course of the story they become you know
- 00:05:06more caring of others or they become
- 00:05:08more humble now it is important to have
- 00:05:11a big Divergence between who the
- 00:05:13character is at the start of the story
- 00:05:14and at the end of the story if you are
- 00:05:16wanting to tell that kind of big
- 00:05:18transformation but it is also important
- 00:05:21that you don't make the characters too
- 00:05:22off-putting at the beginning to the
- 00:05:24point where the reader actually just
- 00:05:26gives up on them and doesn't finish your
- 00:05:28story and doesn't see them eving into
- 00:05:30becoming a better person now don't worry
- 00:05:32though cuz later in this video I'm going
- 00:05:33to show you a very useful technique to
- 00:05:35avoid this mistake even if you are
- 00:05:37writing a character that maybe has some
- 00:05:39undesirable traits or flaws at the
- 00:05:41beginning of your story and then the
- 00:05:43final character Arc mistake that new
- 00:05:45fantasy writers often make is no sense
- 00:05:47of uniqueness and surprise to your
- 00:05:49character's journey in many cases
- 00:05:51readers have a very good intuitive
- 00:05:54understanding of where your character is
- 00:05:55going in the pages of your fantasy story
- 00:05:58they've read you know dozens or hundreds
- 00:05:59of fantasy books they've seen hundreds
- 00:06:01of movies at this point readers are very
- 00:06:03good at just picking up these patterns
- 00:06:05in all these stories and using that to
- 00:06:07predict where a character is going to
- 00:06:08end up so when readers come into your
- 00:06:10story and they see a character who is a
- 00:06:13whiny farm boy who is thinking he'll
- 00:06:16never develop his magical abilities and
- 00:06:17he's complaining about the fact that the
- 00:06:19Empire has control over his Nation we
- 00:06:22intuitively know that this Farm booy is
- 00:06:25probably going to master his magic he's
- 00:06:27probably going to fight against the
- 00:06:28empire and is probably going to win and
- 00:06:30bring freedom and peace to the Galaxy
- 00:06:32that is the kind of split-second you
- 00:06:34know intuitive sense of what readers
- 00:06:36will have of that story just based on
- 00:06:38the patterns that they have seen before
- 00:06:40and as a fantasy writer at the moment
- 00:06:42you really have two choices in this
- 00:06:44scenario so Choice number one is that
- 00:06:45you subvert the reader expectations so
- 00:06:48maybe this Farm Boy actually gets killed
- 00:06:49halfway through the story and the Empire
- 00:06:51wins so Choice number two is you fulfill
- 00:06:53the promise that this setup has made to
- 00:06:55your reader but you do it in a way that
- 00:06:57feels surprising yet inevitable and I
- 00:07:00would argue that most popular classic
- 00:07:02great fantasy stories out there they
- 00:07:03actually do the second option most of
- 00:07:05the time that is they fulfill the
- 00:07:07promise they made at the start but they
- 00:07:08do it in a surprising yet inevitable way
- 00:07:11we're not surprised when Harry Potter
- 00:07:13defeats Voldemort in the Harry Potter
- 00:07:14series I think everyone knew at the
- 00:07:16start of the series that this was going
- 00:07:18to happen however the journey that Harry
- 00:07:20takes to get to this point the
- 00:07:21sacrifices that are made along the way
- 00:07:23the struggles he goes through the change
- 00:07:25he experience he experiences and then of
- 00:07:28course the actual final way in which he
- 00:07:30resolves his last duel with Voldemort is
- 00:07:33done in a way that hopefully surprises
- 00:07:35us and delights us along the journey
- 00:07:37there but again that final dual makes
- 00:07:39total sense in hindsight once the rules
- 00:07:41of the world and the magic kind of Click
- 00:07:43into place generally speaking it's good
- 00:07:45to strike a balance between meeting the
- 00:07:47reader expectations on a macro Big
- 00:07:50Picture level yet surprising them with
- 00:07:52the little details along the journey to
- 00:07:54that point okay so now that you see the
- 00:07:55kind of five common character Arc
- 00:07:57mistakes that I often see new writers
- 00:07:59make whenever I'm editing a story or
- 00:08:01helping someone outline their book um
- 00:08:03let's move on to the three types of
- 00:08:05character arcs you can write because
- 00:08:07there are a lot of ways that you can
- 00:08:08structure a character Arc in your story
- 00:08:10and it's important that you understand
- 00:08:12all three of these in depth so that you
- 00:08:13can pick the correct one for your
- 00:08:15characters and for your book first of
- 00:08:17all we have the positive change Arc so
- 00:08:20this one is pretty straightforward the
- 00:08:21character becomes better over the course
- 00:08:23of the story it's a journey from
- 00:08:25incompleteness and suffering to a sense
- 00:08:27of completeness and fulfillment and
- 00:08:29wholeness for example Bilbo baggin in
- 00:08:31The Hobbit goes from being a sheltered
- 00:08:33home body who's fearful of Adventure to
- 00:08:35a free-spirited traveler who steals
- 00:08:37treasure from dragons and Journeys all
- 00:08:39the way across Middle Earth the next
- 00:08:41type of character Arc is the negative
- 00:08:42Arc so this one shows a character's
- 00:08:44downfall or descent and if you've read a
- 00:08:47tragedy for example or you've watched a
- 00:08:49tragic play this is the arc that most
- 00:08:51tragic characters tend to follow for
- 00:08:53example in best served cold by Joe abrum
- 00:08:56who I've actually had the pleasure of
- 00:08:57interviewing here on this YouTube
- 00:08:58channel um the character of Cole Shivers
- 00:09:01goes from being a optimistic somewhat
- 00:09:03naive immigrant who's coming to this new
- 00:09:05land of steria looking for a fresh start
- 00:09:08looking for fresh opportunity and then
- 00:09:10he over the course of the story he kind
- 00:09:11of allows himself to slip back into his
- 00:09:14violent ways and allow the violence of
- 00:09:16his past to bleed into his present and
- 00:09:19of course other characters like MC Beth
- 00:09:21and Walter White are also great examples
- 00:09:23of a negative Arc as well and then
- 00:09:25lastly we have the flat Arc which is
- 00:09:27something that can trip Riders up
- 00:09:28sometimes because because Arc tends to
- 00:09:31imply change but flat is sort of the
- 00:09:33antithesis of change so flat Arc is just
- 00:09:36one where the character doesn't actually
- 00:09:38change that much over the course of the
- 00:09:39story rather your focus is showing how
- 00:09:43they impact and change the world around
- 00:09:45them so this is something that's often
- 00:09:46done in serialized stories things like
- 00:09:49Sherlock Holmes for example Sherlock
- 00:09:51doesn't really change from story to
- 00:09:52story we come to those stories because
- 00:09:54it's interesting to see the way in which
- 00:09:56he changes the world around him and I
- 00:09:58would actually say Ned stck in a Game of
- 00:10:00Thrones is a fantastic example of a flat
- 00:10:03Arc and shows you that flat does not
- 00:10:05mean boring by any means Ned is a
- 00:10:07honorable man in a dishonorable world
- 00:10:10and when the immovable object of his
- 00:10:11honor encounters the Unstoppable force
- 00:10:13of corruption in King's Landing what
- 00:10:15will it mean for Westeros so over the
- 00:10:17course of the rest of the video I'm
- 00:10:18actually going to be going through
- 00:10:20indepth with billbo baggin's Arc Cole
- 00:10:22shiver's Arc and Ned star's Arc so there
- 00:10:24will be spoilers ahead for The Hobbit
- 00:10:26best served cold and a Game of Thrones
- 00:10:28respectively because I am going to be
- 00:10:30going into a lot of detail with all
- 00:10:32these different character arcs and
- 00:10:33showing you all the individual nuances
- 00:10:35of how they were constructed in such a
- 00:10:36brilliant and memorable manner okay so
- 00:10:38there's five core building blocks that
- 00:10:40you will be using to develop your
- 00:10:41character arcs whether you're writing a
- 00:10:43positive Arc a negative Arc or a flat
- 00:10:45Arc I'm going to go through them in
- 00:10:46brief detail and then I'm going to
- 00:10:47unpack them with a little bit more depth
- 00:10:49so the first component is the ghost so
- 00:10:52the ghost is a sort of traumatic event
- 00:10:54which has shaped your character's
- 00:10:55worldview made a major impact on their
- 00:10:57psyche and is influencing the things
- 00:11:00they are pursuing in your story as a
- 00:11:03result of this character's ghosts they
- 00:11:04have developed a lie this is a warped
- 00:11:07incorrect view of the world which is
- 00:11:09hurting them uh it is hurting the people
- 00:11:11around them as well and it's going to
- 00:11:13lead to them pursuing their want so this
- 00:11:15is an external thing that is outside of
- 00:11:17them that they believe will bring them
- 00:11:19happiness and completeness but in
- 00:11:21reality pursuing the want only
- 00:11:23strengthens the lie and gives more power
- 00:11:25to their ghost which is haunting them
- 00:11:27what they really need is to uncover
- 00:11:29their need which is our fourth component
- 00:11:31here the need is the thing that will
- 00:11:33actually make the character Feel
- 00:11:34Complete and happy and whole and the
- 00:11:37only way that they can get to the need
- 00:11:39is by rejecting their lie and embracing
- 00:11:41the truth which is a more accurate way
- 00:11:43of viewing the world and themselves and
- 00:11:45their role within it so those are the
- 00:11:47five core Arc components let's go
- 00:11:49through those in more detail with some
- 00:11:50examples uh and actually flesh out how
- 00:11:52you can develop these in your story so
- 00:11:55first of all looking at the ghosts so
- 00:11:57the ghosts like I said before is usually
- 00:11:59a traumatic event that created the lie
- 00:12:02and the want within your character it's
- 00:12:04typically something that either occurs
- 00:12:06before your story so for example maybe
- 00:12:07you're writing a fantasy book where your
- 00:12:09main character grew up in a war torn
- 00:12:11nation and this has left a indelible
- 00:12:13impact on her psyche your character's
- 00:12:15ghost might also occur at the start of
- 00:12:17the story for example maybe a parent is
- 00:12:19killed or maybe a character is forced to
- 00:12:22move away to a boarding home that she
- 00:12:23doesn't want to go to this could also be
- 00:12:25the foundation of your character's
- 00:12:27ghosts it is totally up to you if you
- 00:12:29want to reveal your character's ghost
- 00:12:31you've really kind of got three options
- 00:12:33you can blatantly put it out there on
- 00:12:34the page you can maybe hinted it and
- 00:12:36leave it up to the reader's imagination
- 00:12:38um as to the specifics of the ghost or
- 00:12:40you can kind of keep it completely
- 00:12:41hidden and just have it as something
- 00:12:43that you know as the author which
- 00:12:44strengthens your own psychological
- 00:12:46understanding of your characters but you
- 00:12:48don't necessarily need to express it to
- 00:12:50your reader and it's also worth while
- 00:12:53noting that in a series as you go
- 00:12:55through and we are going to be talking
- 00:12:56about structuring your character arcs
- 00:12:58over the course of a series
- 00:12:59later in this video but in a series The
- 00:13:02Ghost might actually suddenly change for
- 00:13:03each book so in book one your character
- 00:13:06might struggle with the ghost for most
- 00:13:08of the story and then resolve their
- 00:13:10relationship with this thing but the
- 00:13:12events of that book might lead to a new
- 00:13:15ghost being created in the next story so
- 00:13:17for example maybe in your first book
- 00:13:20your character kind of falls in love
- 00:13:21with someone else but then at the end of
- 00:13:23this book they break up or this other
- 00:13:25person dies and as a result of that
- 00:13:27there is a new ghost that is now being
- 00:13:29formed for them to struggle with in book
- 00:13:31two and it also is worthwhile noting
- 00:13:34that your ghost doesn't necessarily have
- 00:13:35to be a negative event I recently
- 00:13:38released a course titled 5 days to
- 00:13:40better fantasy characters uh it's a
- 00:13:42totally free email course I think we've
- 00:13:44had over 800 writers go through it so
- 00:13:46far which is awesome and I actually had
- 00:13:47a very interesting response from a
- 00:13:49writer called Joey who went through uh
- 00:13:51the course a few days ago she emailed me
- 00:13:54asking I was wondering whether it has to
- 00:13:55be a negative event at all can it be a
- 00:13:58positive event as well I'm working on a
- 00:14:00book about a young B who romanticizes
- 00:14:02Heroes and against the explicit wishes
- 00:14:04of his parents sets out into the world
- 00:14:06to find and sing about current day
- 00:14:08heroes only to figure out slowly over
- 00:14:10time the world isn't as pretty as he
- 00:14:12believes and the heroes he romanticizes
- 00:14:14are basically frauds his ghost if I can
- 00:14:17call it that isn't a negative experience
- 00:14:19but rather him just absolutely falling
- 00:14:21in love with heroic music and poetry at
- 00:14:24a young age when he experiences a live
- 00:14:26performance from one of the best poets
- 00:14:29in the world would this qualify as a
- 00:14:31proper ghost or will I have to introduce
- 00:14:33a negative event to give it more power
- 00:14:36Joey has had a really fantastic
- 00:14:38interpretation of the ghost here and
- 00:14:40I've actually going to be updating the
- 00:14:41course as a result of Joey's fantastic
- 00:14:43email so thank you Joey for sending in
- 00:14:45this question and for giving me
- 00:14:46permission to share it here cuz she is
- 00:14:47totally right you know your ghost
- 00:14:49doesn't necessarily have to be this big
- 00:14:51negative traumatic thing I think that um
- 00:14:54it just has to be something that has a
- 00:14:56big impact and it has this lingering
- 00:14:58presence in the back of your character's
- 00:15:00mind that really influences how they're
- 00:15:02moving through the world to give you
- 00:15:04some inspiration for your character's
- 00:15:06ghost here are 10 archetypes that your
- 00:15:08ghosts might decide to follow the first
- 00:15:10one is the loss of a protector like a
- 00:15:12parent a guardian a friend uh a sense of
- 00:15:15survivors guilt a be experience of being
- 00:15:18betrayed by an ally by someone who was
- 00:15:19close to a character but wasn't in
- 00:15:21reality a past failure that they're
- 00:15:23still struggling to move on from a dark
- 00:15:25secret that's sort of Haunting them
- 00:15:26inside the experience of being exil from
- 00:15:29a community whether that's you know a
- 00:15:31kind of family group a friend group or a
- 00:15:33professional group uh maybe they were a
- 00:15:35veteran of a great struggle like a war
- 00:15:37or even some political issue in the past
- 00:15:39maybe they grew up as an orphan which
- 00:15:41you know we see quite often in fantasy
- 00:15:42stories but you can still absolutely do
- 00:15:44this in a good way maybe they witnessed
- 00:15:46something really traumatic that kind of
- 00:15:48left a bit of a scar on their mind or
- 00:15:50perhaps they're living under some kind
- 00:15:52of curse okay so once you've got your
- 00:15:54character's ghost developed then it's
- 00:15:55time to look at the lie so the LIE is
- 00:15:58our second out of the five core
- 00:15:59components of a character Arc and it is
- 00:16:01essentially a misconception a character
- 00:16:03has formed about themselves or the world
- 00:16:05as a result of their ghost the LIE is
- 00:16:08hurting your character even if they
- 00:16:10don't know it and usually at the start
- 00:16:12of your fantasy book your character is
- 00:16:14ignorant of the lie in fact they might
- 00:16:17even think the LIE is a source of
- 00:16:18strength but in reality is something
- 00:16:20that's hurting them and the people
- 00:16:22around them as well the LIE is the main
- 00:16:24reason for your character's flaws so
- 00:16:27it's making them incomplete and you can
- 00:16:29find it by kind of looking at these
- 00:16:30different symptoms of how lies tend to
- 00:16:32manifest which is the things characters
- 00:16:34are afraid of or extreme hurt inability
- 00:16:37to forgive other people guilt Dark
- 00:16:38Secrets shame all of these different
- 00:16:40things are typically manifestations of
- 00:16:42your character's lie so if you're not
- 00:16:44entirely certain what your character's
- 00:16:46lie is right now just look at these
- 00:16:48different things here and then Trace
- 00:16:51back the reason for why the character is
- 00:16:53behaving in that way it usually comes
- 00:16:55back to having a misconception about the
- 00:16:57world which again goes back to their
- 00:17:00ghost it's also really useful
- 00:17:02particularly when you're writing a
- 00:17:03fantasy novel to be asking yourself how
- 00:17:05does my world building affect and
- 00:17:07potentially reinforce my characters lie
- 00:17:10and you'll see with all three character
- 00:17:12examples I'm going through later in this
- 00:17:13video with billb waggons uh with Cole
- 00:17:16Shivers and with Ned Stark how the World
- 00:17:18building is used in a masterful way to
- 00:17:20actually uh develop and explore the lie
- 00:17:23in the character's lives so here are 10
- 00:17:25lie archetypes that might give you some
- 00:17:26more inspiration as well the character
- 00:17:28might believe that they are inherently
- 00:17:29unworthy um or that to trust other
- 00:17:32people is a form of weakness maybe that
- 00:17:34power is the only way to get safety that
- 00:17:36happiness is something they will never
- 00:17:38be able to accomplish that they have to
- 00:17:39do things alone in their life that
- 00:17:42change of any type is dangerous that
- 00:17:44emotions are a weakness that they should
- 00:17:46avoid at all costs that self-sacrifice
- 00:17:49is noble and they should kind of you
- 00:17:50know keep giving themselves up for other
- 00:17:52people that they must uphold a
- 00:17:54particular tradition or that love is a
- 00:17:56trap and a dangerous thing they should
- 00:17:58steal away from so once you got your
- 00:18:00character's lie this is then going to
- 00:18:02inform their want so the want is what
- 00:18:05your character thinks will make them
- 00:18:07happy or complete it's usually something
- 00:18:09that is external and physical and kind
- 00:18:11of outside of the main character they
- 00:18:13think that by grabbing this thing that's
- 00:18:15outside of them it will solve whatever
- 00:18:17problem is actually up here in their
- 00:18:19head and it is again an attempt to solve
- 00:18:21their incompleteness they think they're
- 00:18:23going to be happy when they get it um
- 00:18:25and they will typically in most stories
- 00:18:27most positive stories be spending most
- 00:18:30of the time on the page trying to
- 00:18:33accomplish this thing the problem is
- 00:18:36that the more they pursue the want it
- 00:18:38strengthens their lie and when it comes
- 00:18:41to actually developing out the want I
- 00:18:42like to use this tool I Constructor
- 00:18:44called the axis of Desire so you can
- 00:18:46basically see here across the top of the
- 00:18:48axis sorry across the sort of vertical
- 00:18:51um axis here we've got all these
- 00:18:53different emotional things that a
- 00:18:55character could experience whether
- 00:18:56they're Revenge power love knowledge
- 00:18:58freedom Redemption survival Justice
- 00:18:59Adventure Etc and then across the top of
- 00:19:02the axis we have the different external
- 00:19:04ways in which the character could
- 00:19:06potentially accomplish this thing so
- 00:19:08they could get revenge against a person
- 00:19:10they could get revenge by developing a
- 00:19:13particular status or role in a society
- 00:19:15um they could get Love by finding a
- 00:19:18place for example or they could get Love
- 00:19:20by you know getting to a status or role
- 00:19:23that symbolizes uh love or maybe allows
- 00:19:26them to get love from a lot of other
- 00:19:27people out there and when you're using
- 00:19:29the axess of Desire um which is
- 00:19:30something that I take my students
- 00:19:31through in my fantasy outlanding boot
- 00:19:33camp in quite some depth as well you
- 00:19:35basically want to be sort of locating
- 00:19:37the main thing your character is going
- 00:19:38for so in this example here let's say my
- 00:19:41character is trying to accomplish
- 00:19:43survival and the way that they're going
- 00:19:44to be doing that is by trying to find a
- 00:19:47place so in other words they're striving
- 00:19:48to reach or stay in a kind of Safe Haven
- 00:19:50or Sanctuary um this is the plot of my
- 00:19:53fantasy novel across the broken Stars my
- 00:19:55main character Leon is helping a
- 00:19:57fugitive try to reach this place that is
- 00:20:00sort of mythical that may or may not
- 00:20:01exist um in order to give them safety
- 00:20:03against the Inquisition that is pursuing
- 00:20:05them and once you have located your sort
- 00:20:08of main want on this axis of desire you
- 00:20:11can then actually spread out
- 00:20:12horizontally from that to find potential
- 00:20:14subplot ideas so my character in across
- 00:20:17broken Stars he's trying to reach or
- 00:20:19stay in a safe haven or sanctuary and
- 00:20:21there's a lot of different like subplots
- 00:20:23you could weave into that so maybe to
- 00:20:25accomplish this goal we then come across
- 00:20:27to the person column and they have to
- 00:20:29now rely on a person for survival in a
- 00:20:31tough circumstance or they have to find
- 00:20:33someone for for information that's then
- 00:20:35going to lead to this Safe Haven or
- 00:20:36Sanctuary maybe if you come across to
- 00:20:38the thing column they actually have to
- 00:20:40seek an item that gives them a clue to
- 00:20:41get to this location you get the idea
- 00:20:43it's a way that you can kind of um
- 00:20:45figure out the core want of your
- 00:20:47character and then kind of spread out
- 00:20:49with these different subplot ideas from
- 00:20:51here so now that you have those three
- 00:20:54first components of your character Arc
- 00:20:56those are all the things that are sort
- 00:20:57of setting flaw and and setting things
- 00:20:59for your character to overcome now we're
- 00:21:01going to start talking about the sort of
- 00:21:03more positive side of your character Arc
- 00:21:05so first of all this is begins with the
- 00:21:07need so the need is what the character
- 00:21:09actually requires to be complete your
- 00:21:11character has the want which they think
- 00:21:13will make them complete and then it has
- 00:21:15the need which will actually make them
- 00:21:17complete so you can think about the need
- 00:21:19as something that Prov provides a
- 00:21:21personalized antidote to your characters
- 00:21:23lie and usually unlike the want which is
- 00:21:26typically external it's outside of the
- 00:21:28character the need is usually a key
- 00:21:30realization a key internal Epiphany that
- 00:21:33a character experiences it's something
- 00:21:35that will typically challenge the status
- 00:21:37quo of the the world around them and
- 00:21:40maybe the people and the society around
- 00:21:41them as well and to think about some
- 00:21:44different ways you can sort of structure
- 00:21:45your needs here here are sort of 10 need
- 00:21:47archetypes I find useful first of all is
- 00:21:50a character accepts themselves maybe
- 00:21:52they learn to have trust in others maybe
- 00:21:54they recognize that vulnerability can
- 00:21:55actually be a form of strength maybe
- 00:21:57they learn how to embrace change they
- 00:21:59develop emotional honesty they find
- 00:22:01personal happiness they learn how to
- 00:22:02balance between themselves and others
- 00:22:04they challenge tradition that has uh
- 00:22:06kind of oppressed them up until this
- 00:22:08point maybe they develop a newfound
- 00:22:10openness to love or maybe they learn how
- 00:22:13to kind of achieve self validation
- 00:22:15without relying on other people around
- 00:22:17them you can see looking at these need
- 00:22:19archetypes how they really contrast
- 00:22:21quite a bit to the LIE archetypes that I
- 00:22:24explained earlier in this video because
- 00:22:26again the need is something that is
- 00:22:27providing a antidote or a response to a
- 00:22:31character's lie this brings us to the
- 00:22:33last part of a character Arc in terms of
- 00:22:35the five core art questions um so this
- 00:22:38is the character's truth again this is
- 00:22:40something that's providing an antidote
- 00:22:42to the LIE uh the character is going to
- 00:22:44be struggling to accept this over the
- 00:22:45most of the story and it's usually in a
- 00:22:47positive Arc Type of Story Only
- 00:22:49something your character will wrap their
- 00:22:51heads around towards the very end of the
- 00:22:54narrative in fact as I've sort of noted
- 00:22:56here um typically the climax occurs when
- 00:22:58character accepts their truth and is
- 00:23:00able to Vanquish the lie for good as a
- 00:23:02result the truth is something that makes
- 00:23:04your character feel more complete it's
- 00:23:07typically something that will relate to
- 00:23:09a core contradiction within a character
- 00:23:11as well so maybe they've been struggling
- 00:23:13the whole story to sort of balance their
- 00:23:15duty to their family with their own
- 00:23:18desires and their own um interests that
- 00:23:20they are pursuing and the truth is
- 00:23:22something that's actually going to allow
- 00:23:23them to potentially resolve and collapse
- 00:23:25that core contradiction with a new
- 00:23:27understanding that allows it to stop
- 00:23:28being a source of suffering within their
- 00:23:30life having said that the truth is not
- 00:23:32always an easy answer usually it's
- 00:23:34something that is quite hard one over
- 00:23:36the course of your narrative and it
- 00:23:38might even open up more difficult
- 00:23:39questions for your character to face in
- 00:23:41the next book in your series to give you
- 00:23:43some inspiration for potential character
- 00:23:45truths it might be this belief that
- 00:23:46worthiness is something they
- 00:23:48intrinsically have that trust in others
- 00:23:50is actually a sign of strength that
- 00:23:52power doesn't guarantee safety that
- 00:23:54happiness is within reach for them that
- 00:23:55strength can be found in community and
- 00:23:57not just being a lone wolf that change
- 00:23:59is a form of growth uh that emotions are
- 00:24:01totally human and fine to experience
- 00:24:03that self-care is necessary that
- 00:24:05tradition can evolve and can change and
- 00:24:07that love is strength and of course this
- 00:24:09is just a small sample of potential
- 00:24:11truths that your character could
- 00:24:13experience as with all of these sort of
- 00:24:15archetypical examples I've given so far
- 00:24:17there's really infinite possibility here
- 00:24:19so don't stress if the one you're
- 00:24:20writing doesn't fit into the the list of
- 00:24:2310 I'm giving here I also want to give
- 00:24:24credit to C and wiland for a fantastic
- 00:24:26book titled creating character arcs this
- 00:24:28is where I actually found these sort of
- 00:24:30five core art components um and I've
- 00:24:32since sort of developed that and refined
- 00:24:34that through my own writing so it's a
- 00:24:35very good book and it's well worthwhile
- 00:24:37reading so now that we have these five
- 00:24:38core Arc components here's how you use
- 00:24:40them to structure a positive Arc in your
- 00:24:42fantasy novel at the beginning in a
- 00:24:44positive Arc your character is going to
- 00:24:46fully believe the lie as a result of the
- 00:24:49ghost they're ignorant of the truth at
- 00:24:51this stage in the story and so as a
- 00:24:53result they're pursuing their want
- 00:24:55however as they go through this pursuit
- 00:24:57of the want they real the LIE is hurting
- 00:24:59them and it's perhaps hurting the people
- 00:25:01around them as well so they begin to
- 00:25:03flirt with the truth they test it out a
- 00:25:05little bit they experiment using it but
- 00:25:08the truth is challenged it's not so easy
- 00:25:10to change their behavior in this way so
- 00:25:12they're very tempted at this point to
- 00:25:14return to the lie and at the climax they
- 00:25:16are forced to have this really difficult
- 00:25:19decision will they pick the new truth
- 00:25:21and allow their old self to die or will
- 00:25:24they allow their new self to die and
- 00:25:26will they revert back to believing the
- 00:25:28LIE and because it is a positive Arc the
- 00:25:30character is going to be picking the
- 00:25:31truth they're going to be rejecting and
- 00:25:33vanquishing the lie and they're going to
- 00:25:35be moving up in a state of completeness
- 00:25:37and development uh and potentially again
- 00:25:39if you're writing a series then this may
- 00:25:42sort of reset and it may change in the
- 00:25:44second book but I will again explain
- 00:25:45that a bit later in this video a great
- 00:25:47example of a positive character Arc is
- 00:25:48Bilbo bgins from The Hobbit he goes
- 00:25:50through this experience of going from a
- 00:25:52place of comfort to slowly developing
- 00:25:54courage and eventually becoming a hero
- 00:25:56over the course of the story his ghost
- 00:25:59is the fear of the unknown world that
- 00:26:01lies Beyond his comfortable little life
- 00:26:03in the Shire and the lie that he tells
- 00:26:05himself as a result of this ghost is
- 00:26:07that Adventures are unnecessary and
- 00:26:09dangerous and I am meant to live a quiet
- 00:26:11little hobbit life without danger or
- 00:26:13disturbance and his want is simply I
- 00:26:15just want to maintain my peaceful
- 00:26:16uneventful life here in the Shire I
- 00:26:19don't want to travel however the need he
- 00:26:21actually has is to embrace this inner
- 00:26:24craving for adventure that his
- 00:26:25subconscious has to step out of his
- 00:26:27comfort zone and find the courage to
- 00:26:29grow and become a hero and actually
- 00:26:32become someone who goes off on these
- 00:26:33bold and daring quests so the truth he
- 00:26:36eventually learns throughout the course
- 00:26:38of The Hobbit is that courage and a
- 00:26:40sense of adventure are these qualities
- 00:26:42that actually does lie within him and
- 00:26:43that he can accomplish great Deeds now
- 00:26:46let's look at structuring a negative
- 00:26:48character Arc so in a negative character
- 00:26:51Arc you you alter things a little bit
- 00:26:52here at the beginning your character
- 00:26:54actually fully believes the truth they
- 00:26:56start by believing the truth notice this
- 00:26:58is the opposite to a positive character
- 00:27:00Arc the character also has their need
- 00:27:03met at the beginning of the story so
- 00:27:05they know the truth and they are living
- 00:27:07with the need you would think that they
- 00:27:08feel complete at this point and usually
- 00:27:11they do however then the lie comes along
- 00:27:14and the LIE is a bit of a Temptation for
- 00:27:16them you know it's something that uh
- 00:27:18maybe leads to them chasing their want
- 00:27:21and neglecting their need a little bit
- 00:27:23uh as a result the LIE begins to
- 00:27:25overtake the truth and the climax of a
- 00:27:28negative Arc story typically presents
- 00:27:30the character with the last chance to
- 00:27:32step back from the abyss to step back
- 00:27:34from the brink and to return to the
- 00:27:36truth however they can't do it the want
- 00:27:39is too tempting they fully embrace the
- 00:27:41lie and they reject their truth and
- 00:27:43again this is a typical Arc that most
- 00:27:45tragedies tend to follow so let's look
- 00:27:47at an example of a fantastic negative
- 00:27:50character Arc which is Cole Shivers from
- 00:27:51best served cold by Joe abomi again
- 00:27:54there's going to be spoilers ahead for
- 00:27:55context on best served cold this is
- 00:27:57essentially Kill Bill set in a fantasy
- 00:27:59world absolutely love this story um and
- 00:28:01it is about this mercenary called monzo
- 00:28:03makado who tries to get revenge on the
- 00:28:05people who attempted to kill her Shivers
- 00:28:08is I would say the second main character
- 00:28:10in this story he has almost as much uh
- 00:28:12point of view chapters as makado um and
- 00:28:15he basically is this Northman who comes
- 00:28:17to the land of steria looking to put his
- 00:28:19violent past behind him looking to have
- 00:28:22a new and peaceful and happy life but he
- 00:28:25eventually kind of Falls in with Mado
- 00:28:27and begins to help her on her quest for
- 00:28:28Revenge um which leads to him you know
- 00:28:31sort of reverting to his old violent
- 00:28:33ways so his Arc is one of going from
- 00:28:35naive to courage to love to Despair and
- 00:28:37then lastly to anger uh and I didn't put
- 00:28:39it on here but you could maybe argue
- 00:28:41then he kind of goes back to acceptance
- 00:28:43after anger here as well so there's
- 00:28:45quite a few steps in his Arc it's a
- 00:28:46little bit longer than Bilbo here his
- 00:28:48ghost is his violent past as a warrior
- 00:28:50in the north his truth and you notice
- 00:28:52here that because this is a negative Arc
- 00:28:54I'm actually structuring things a little
- 00:28:56bit differently here so the truth that
- 00:28:58sh has is that I can build this new
- 00:29:00peaceful life if I just stop using
- 00:29:02violence to find purpose and I allow
- 00:29:03myself to just kind of be an ordinary
- 00:29:05person and I'm not you know going into
- 00:29:07my baser more more savage or angry ways
- 00:29:10his need is to let go of his anger and
- 00:29:12his ego and move on from his violent
- 00:29:14past and at the start of the story he
- 00:29:16displays both the truth and the need
- 00:29:18however he as he goes through his
- 00:29:20experience in steria and he realizes
- 00:29:22it's not the paradise he was promised um
- 00:29:24he starts to kind of begrudge the fact
- 00:29:26that people treat him with disrespect
- 00:29:28and they're rude towards him and so his
- 00:29:30want that he begins to develop is that I
- 00:29:32really want to regain Respect power and
- 00:29:34affection from the people around me
- 00:29:36which leads to his lie and I've actually
- 00:29:38expressed his lie here in a direct
- 00:29:39quotation from uh a scene in the final
- 00:29:42pages of best serve cold where Shiva
- 00:29:44says reckon I've learned just to stick
- 00:29:46at the place I'm at just to be the man I
- 00:29:49am Mado asks him what's that and he says
- 00:29:52a killer so usually when you're studying
- 00:29:55stories you can actually usually find
- 00:29:57Direct quotes um to support these five
- 00:29:59core components of a character's Arc
- 00:30:01lastly well let's look at structuring a
- 00:30:03flat Arc so at the beginning of a flat
- 00:30:05Arc your character is going to fully
- 00:30:07believe the truth and they likely
- 00:30:09already are living with their need
- 00:30:11remember with the flat Arc the character
- 00:30:13themselves is not really the focus of
- 00:30:15change instead you're looking more at
- 00:30:16how they impact the world around them so
- 00:30:19this is the thing while the character
- 00:30:20fully believes the truth and has the
- 00:30:22need the world around them or other
- 00:30:24characters around them believes the lie
- 00:30:26as a result this leads to conflict the
- 00:30:28world attempts to reinforce the LIE the
- 00:30:31character's truth is challenged and but
- 00:30:33the character of course remains
- 00:30:34steadfast because it is a flat Arc which
- 00:30:36doesn't mean that you can't necessarily
- 00:30:38have moments of doubt and uncertainty
- 00:30:39within them it just means that within a
- 00:30:41flat Arc typically the character's sort
- 00:30:43of moral code and moral compass remains
- 00:30:46you know relatively True North the whole
- 00:30:48time this leads to two options for your
- 00:30:50climax in the first option your
- 00:30:52character's truth triumphs they are able
- 00:30:53to bring the truth to the world and the
- 00:30:55world kind of conforms to your
- 00:30:57character's view of things with the
- 00:30:59second option the LIE is too strong it
- 00:31:01vanquishes the truth and the character
- 00:31:03is defeated this might be like a literal
- 00:31:05defeat where a character dies or it may
- 00:31:07be more of a kind of moral or
- 00:31:09psychological um or philosophical defeat
- 00:31:11it's also worthwhile here that I'm
- 00:31:13talking about the notion of truth and
- 00:31:14lie and that maybe makes you think that
- 00:31:16the character is having to persuade
- 00:31:18people to change their minds that could
- 00:31:21be the Avenue you take but usually the
- 00:31:23truth and the LIE is expressed in a more
- 00:31:25metaphorical sense of things so if we
- 00:31:27take the example of Indiana Jones in
- 00:31:28Raiders of the Lost Arc which is
- 00:31:29absolutely one of my favorite films I
- 00:31:31love that movie so much I've probably
- 00:31:32seen it like 20 times Indiana goes
- 00:31:35through a flat Arc at the beginning of
- 00:31:36the story he believes that these ancient
- 00:31:37artifacts belong in a museum and at the
- 00:31:39end of the story he believes that these
- 00:31:41ancient artifacts belong in a museum
- 00:31:43however the Nazis that he's fighting
- 00:31:45against they don't believe this they
- 00:31:47believe the lie that these ancient
- 00:31:48artifacts should be used um to create
- 00:31:50their own power and to help with further
- 00:31:53their own evil goals and so there's no
- 00:31:56point in which India Jones convinces the
- 00:31:59Nazis to accept his truth it's simply a
- 00:32:01case of his truth and the Nazis lie kind
- 00:32:04of butting heads against each other in
- 00:32:06the Physical Realm until eventually
- 00:32:08Indiana Jones manages to outlast and
- 00:32:11outwit them long enough um to get the
- 00:32:13Arc of the Covenant back into a museum
- 00:32:15or at least that's what he thinks ends
- 00:32:17up going into a government Warehouse
- 00:32:18instead so you know technically he
- 00:32:20doesn't really win either but the other
- 00:32:21form that your flat Arc could go through
- 00:32:23is actually your main character being in
- 00:32:25more of a mentor role and using their
- 00:32:29truth to help a you know different
- 00:32:31character learn to accept that truth for
- 00:32:33themselves so the character is the
- 00:32:35mentor in this case and they are
- 00:32:37allowing another character to go through
- 00:32:38a positive change Arc that's one way you
- 00:32:40could also structure this and a great
- 00:32:42example of a flat Arc that certainly
- 00:32:44doesn't feel as boring as the name flat
- 00:32:46tends to convey is Ned Stark from A Game
- 00:32:48of Thrones so he experiences a flat Arc
- 00:32:51through this his Arc could be described
- 00:32:53as honor conviction and death as the
- 00:32:55final stage here again the be spoilers
- 00:32:58for all these but I kind of assume you
- 00:33:00know that Ned star dies in Game of
- 00:33:01Thrones here um so Ned's ghost is kind
- 00:33:04of his loyalty to King Robert barathon
- 00:33:06uh and his truth is that we must do what
- 00:33:08is right no matter the cost he's a man
- 00:33:10of Honor he's a man of Oaths so his need
- 00:33:12that he has at the beginning of Game of
- 00:33:14Thrones is he has to remain true to his
- 00:33:16Oaths his lie or the lie that the world
- 00:33:19presents at him rather is that sometimes
- 00:33:21our Oaths should bend for the greater
- 00:33:23good and the want that is going to tempt
- 00:33:26Ned but never be something that he falls
- 00:33:28into which is kind of ironic is to stop
- 00:33:30Westeros from falling back into war so
- 00:33:32you can see here how the truth and the
- 00:33:34need are paired we must do what is right
- 00:33:36no matter the cost and the need is to
- 00:33:38remain true to his Oaths and the lie and
- 00:33:39the want are also paired as well in
- 00:33:42order to stop westros from falling back
- 00:33:43into war maybe sometimes we should allow
- 00:33:45our Oaths to bend that that lie and want
- 00:33:48combination is going to tempt Ned
- 00:33:50throughout the course of the story but
- 00:33:53as we kind of see over the duration of
- 00:33:55the narrative his truth and need win out
- 00:33:57he goes through this flat Journey uh and
- 00:33:59as a result he is later punished so we
- 00:34:01are going to discuss the nuances of that
- 00:34:03uh a bit later and in more detail later
- 00:34:05in this video now before we move on to
- 00:34:06discussing how theme fits into this
- 00:34:08whole picture of character arcs I want
- 00:34:10to share a quick bonus tip at this point
- 00:34:12no matter what type of character Arc
- 00:34:14you're writing in your fantasy novel I
- 00:34:16personally find it much easier when I
- 00:34:18outline my character arcs ahead of time
- 00:34:20to then write Great Character arcs in my
- 00:34:22first draft when I started out as a
- 00:34:24writer when I was 14 years old and
- 00:34:26working on my first book The a on
- 00:34:27Academy I did not do this I just started
- 00:34:29writing it by the seat of my pants and
- 00:34:31as a result the arcs in that story if
- 00:34:33you even want to call them arcs were
- 00:34:35just so messy and disjointed and they
- 00:34:37made all of those mistakes I mentioned
- 00:34:39earlier in the video realistically there
- 00:34:41probably probably wasn't even that much
- 00:34:42uh meaningful character change in that
- 00:34:44story and as a result it was never good
- 00:34:46enough that I felt even confident about
- 00:34:48trying to approach publication with that
- 00:34:50thing but then when I came around to
- 00:34:51writing my second fantasy novel across
- 00:34:53the broken Stars which you know spoilers
- 00:34:55was eventually later published um I did
- 00:34:57actually approach that with an outline
- 00:34:59and as a result of having that outline
- 00:35:01it just made it so much easier for me to
- 00:35:02get my character arcs right before I
- 00:35:04even began writing that first draft
- 00:35:06what's great about outlining for your
- 00:35:07character arcs is that you can work
- 00:35:09backwards from the end State or the end
- 00:35:11transformation that you're trying to get
- 00:35:12your character to create so if you know
- 00:35:14you want them to get to a point of being
- 00:35:16selfless and brave then you can work
- 00:35:18backwards and you can make them as
- 00:35:19selfish and cowardly as you possibly can
- 00:35:22at the start of your story which is you
- 00:35:24know kind of what across the broken
- 00:35:26stars is all about and right now you
- 00:35:27might thinking okay Jed I can see the
- 00:35:29benefits of that but I'm worried about
- 00:35:30spoiling the joy of Discovery and I
- 00:35:32worry that if I outline my character
- 00:35:34arcs it will rob a lot of my excitement
- 00:35:35as I go through the writing process I
- 00:35:37certainly had that worry as well I have
- 00:35:39not found that to be the case at all
- 00:35:41even with something like Kingdom of
- 00:35:42Dragons my most recent fantasy novel I
- 00:35:44wrote like a 30 page outline for this
- 00:35:46thing yet there was still so much room
- 00:35:48for my characters to surprise and
- 00:35:50Delight me with these little moments and
- 00:35:52sometimes these quite big moments um as
- 00:35:54I was going through the process of
- 00:35:56writing the first draft outlining is
- 00:35:58simply just something that makes sure
- 00:36:00you have the structural scaffold there
- 00:36:02so that your story is working on this
- 00:36:04Big Picture level and then actually
- 00:36:06gives you more creative freedom um to
- 00:36:08kind of paint in between those big
- 00:36:10picture structural moments that you have
- 00:36:11now if you're wan to write a really good
- 00:36:12fantasy character Arc it's critical to
- 00:36:14understand how theme integrates into
- 00:36:16your character's transformation so first
- 00:36:19of all I Define theme as a moral
- 00:36:20argument that is explored in different
- 00:36:22ways through your story it's not about
- 00:36:24you know preaching or trying to ram a
- 00:36:26particular political message Mage down
- 00:36:28the throat of your reader it's simply
- 00:36:30about presenting a complex question
- 00:36:32about how best to live and then having
- 00:36:34characters and your world and events in
- 00:36:36your plot explore that question and come
- 00:36:39up with different answers uh from all
- 00:36:40these different possible angles
- 00:36:42throughout your story so for example in
- 00:36:44The Hobbit I would say the theme of that
- 00:36:45story is that true happiness comes from
- 00:36:48embracing adventure and stepping outside
- 00:36:50your comfort zone and as we go through
- 00:36:52the character arcs later on you're going
- 00:36:53to see how this is made manifest in best
- 00:36:56served cold about Jo abomi I would say
- 00:36:59that the theme is the pursuit of
- 00:37:00vengeance is a corruptive force that
- 00:37:02takes you further away from peace and
- 00:37:04leaves only destruction in its wake so
- 00:37:06again theme is an argument and an
- 00:37:08argument means that you can kind of come
- 00:37:10in it from whatever angle you want so
- 00:37:12there are some characters who kind of
- 00:37:14their Arc demonstrates this theme it
- 00:37:16demonstrates that vengeance is a
- 00:37:18corruptive force but then there's also
- 00:37:20some characters where you kind of see
- 00:37:22Vengeance genuinely bringing them maybe
- 00:37:24some semblance of peace or or purpose or
- 00:37:27a a bit of happiness at least and so
- 00:37:29this is why the story feels morally
- 00:37:30complex and interesting to read and then
- 00:37:32lastly in a Game of Thrones I would say
- 00:37:34the theme is honor is a hindrance if you
- 00:37:36wish to have power again you will have
- 00:37:38characters come at this from lots of
- 00:37:39different angles now what you're
- 00:37:41probably noticing with this the these
- 00:37:43different themes here is that they align
- 00:37:45pretty closely with our character's
- 00:37:47truths and generally speaking when you
- 00:37:49have synthesis between your story's
- 00:37:52theme and the truth of a character's Arc
- 00:37:55that is how you tie your character AR to
- 00:37:57your theme in a way that creates a
- 00:37:59really resonant and emotionally and
- 00:38:01morally rich and interesting story to
- 00:38:03tell let's unpack the theme of A Game of
- 00:38:05Thrones in a little bit more detail so
- 00:38:07we have some different quotes from
- 00:38:08various characters here we have little
- 00:38:10finger saying you wear your honor like a
- 00:38:12suit of armor stock you think it keeps
- 00:38:13you safe but all it does is weigh you
- 00:38:15down so little finger is kind of
- 00:38:17demonstrating the theme that honor is a
- 00:38:19hindrance when it comes to searching for
- 00:38:21power we have Cersei say a true man does
- 00:38:23what he will not what he must so again
- 00:38:25she's sort of taking a different
- 00:38:27interpret and a different angle on this
- 00:38:29theme revolving around these ideas of
- 00:38:30Honor we have Lord ver saying you're an
- 00:38:33honest and honorable man Lord added
- 00:38:34often times I forget that I have met so
- 00:38:36few of them in my life he glanced around
- 00:38:38the cell when I see what honesty and
- 00:38:40honor have won you I understand why so
- 00:38:43again all these different people with
- 00:38:45various perspectives on what honor is
- 00:38:47and what role it kind of has um in this
- 00:38:50world and then lastly from Jamie
- 00:38:52Lannister give me honorable enemies
- 00:38:54rather than ambitious ones and I'll
- 00:38:55sleep more easily by night so earlier I
- 00:38:58promised to talk a little bit more about
- 00:38:59how you can structure character arcs in
- 00:39:01a series and broadly speaking there's a
- 00:39:03couple of different ways you can go
- 00:39:04about this you might have your character
- 00:39:05go through a flat Arc in the first book
- 00:39:07and then they also go in a flat Arc in
- 00:39:09the second book and all future books on
- 00:39:10after this again stories where they're
- 00:39:12quite serialized in nature where you're
- 00:39:14trying to write something where a reader
- 00:39:16could come into book three or they could
- 00:39:18come into book five or they could come
- 00:39:19into book one and they're still going to
- 00:39:21have a good experience tend to use this
- 00:39:23kind of format another format you can
- 00:39:25use is you have a positive Arc your main
- 00:39:27character in the first book and then
- 00:39:29from that point on they sort of have
- 00:39:31flat arcs in the future books so they
- 00:39:33learn important lessons in the first
- 00:39:34book and then in future books it's them
- 00:39:36kind of just using the truth they have
- 00:39:39learned from that first book um and you
- 00:39:41know with the need they have from that
- 00:39:42first book as well using that to just
- 00:39:45sort of structure their arcs for the
- 00:39:46rest of the series now again just
- 00:39:48because this says flat Arc here doesn't
- 00:39:50necessarily mean it's going to be a
- 00:39:51boring second book quite often the
- 00:39:53positive Arc your character is going
- 00:39:55through in the first book here will
- 00:39:56create new new challenges for them to
- 00:39:58solve in the second book for example if
- 00:40:00you look at a story like the way of
- 00:40:01Kings by Brandon Sanderson in the first
- 00:40:03book kaladan goes from being this sort
- 00:40:05of haplous depressed slave to eventually
- 00:40:08becoming the leader of this uh sort of
- 00:40:12crew of soldiers and so he goes through
- 00:40:14a positive Arc in the first book um but
- 00:40:16it doesn't mean that his transformation
- 00:40:17stops there and his challenges stop
- 00:40:19there rather because now he has added
- 00:40:21responsibilities that have come from the
- 00:40:24transformation and change he went
- 00:40:25through in the first book another Arc
- 00:40:27you can do do which is a little bit more
- 00:40:28difficult but can be really interesting
- 00:40:29when it's pulled off well is you have a
- 00:40:31positive Arc for your character in the
- 00:40:32first book and then a negative Arc in
- 00:40:34the second one this is tricky because
- 00:40:36you want to avoid the feeling that
- 00:40:38progress has been undone and you don't
- 00:40:40want to feel like the character has just
- 00:40:42reverted or reversed all of the growth
- 00:40:44that we spend so much time watching them
- 00:40:46go through having said that there are
- 00:40:49stories that do this really really well
- 00:40:51I would say the first two June books in
- 00:40:53particular do this amazingly well the
- 00:40:55first book is about polar treaties
- 00:40:57become the Messiah becoming the Emperor
- 00:40:59of this universe but then in the second
- 00:41:01book we kind of see the terrible ways in
- 00:41:04which that is destroying his life and
- 00:41:06destroying the lives of the people
- 00:41:08around him and the ending of of June
- 00:41:10Messiah the second book in the series
- 00:41:12just had me emotionally flawed because
- 00:41:14of this descent that we see Paul go
- 00:41:17through in that story and then another
- 00:41:18Arc shape you can do here is you have a
- 00:41:20positive Arc in the first book and that
- 00:41:22leads to a different type of positive
- 00:41:23Arc in the second one you do need to pay
- 00:41:26attention to make sure that they don't
- 00:41:27feel you know too repetitive you want to
- 00:41:29make sure that the type of challenge the
- 00:41:31main character is facing has evolved or
- 00:41:34it's leveled up or it's more difficult
- 00:41:35now or there's more at stake or there's
- 00:41:37just a different angle of conflict
- 00:41:40that's going to attack your character
- 00:41:41you may also have your character go
- 00:41:42through a negative Arc in the first book
- 00:41:44only to redeem themselves with a bit
- 00:41:45more of a positive Arc in the second and
- 00:41:47of course there's lots of other ways
- 00:41:48that you can play around with this as
- 00:41:50well okay so those are the big picture
- 00:41:51principles behind your character arcs
- 00:41:53but at this point you're probably
- 00:41:55wondering how do I actually integrate my
- 00:41:56character arcs cohesively with my plot
- 00:41:59and to do this we need to look at story
- 00:42:01structure there are a ton of different
- 00:42:02ways you can structure your story right
- 00:42:04now after 12 years of writing and having
- 00:42:06published four books at this point and
- 00:42:08done a bunch of other projects the
- 00:42:10approach that I like to use personally
- 00:42:11and that works for me the best is what I
- 00:42:13call ninepoint story structure this is a
- 00:42:16slight modification on Dan Well's uh
- 00:42:18seven-point plot structure although I
- 00:42:20have made a few little tweaks along the
- 00:42:21way to kind of customize this more to my
- 00:42:23own preferences and if you want me to
- 00:42:25personally help you outline the
- 00:42:27character arcs and plot structure in
- 00:42:29your own fantasy novel then you should
- 00:42:30apply for my fantasy outlining boot camp
- 00:42:32this is a 7we group program where you'll
- 00:42:34work alongside me and a small group of
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- 00:42:38arcs your plot Your World building and
- 00:42:40all the other important aspects that go
- 00:42:42into writing a fantastic fantasy novel
- 00:42:44if you think that this video has gone in
- 00:42:46depth on character arcs just wait the
- 00:42:48boot camp is on a whole another level
- 00:42:49this is like a fraction of the stuff
- 00:42:51that we go through in that program which
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- 00:42:54you'll also be joining this great
- 00:42:56community of dedic ated and committed
- 00:42:58fantasy writers uh to be getting support
- 00:43:00and feedback and accountability as you
- 00:43:02go through your writing process here's
- 00:43:03what one of my students said about the
- 00:43:04program I cannot recommend it enough it
- 00:43:07has been immensely helpful in in ways
- 00:43:11that I couldn't have even imagined not
- 00:43:13only did I learn how to outline I
- 00:43:15learned how to outline for myself with
- 00:43:18different tools that I can mix and match
- 00:43:20so immensely helpful to have uh
- 00:43:23like-minded people to work with and
- 00:43:24bounce ideas off with and and sending in
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- 00:43:29assignments and getting feedback from
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- 00:43:56potentially join future cohorts down the
- 00:43:58line okay so let's go through ninepoint
- 00:44:00story structure in some more detail here
- 00:44:02and as we go through this I'm going to
- 00:44:03be showing you the character arcs for
- 00:44:04bbo bagin Cole Shivers and Ned Stark and
- 00:44:08how they intersect with each of these
- 00:44:10nine points in this particular way of
- 00:44:12structuring your story so first of all
- 00:44:13we have the hook which is where you
- 00:44:15introduce your protagonist and
- 00:44:16especially his flaws and Desires in a
- 00:44:18compelling way the most important thing
- 00:44:20to get across in your hook is to show
- 00:44:21the characteristic moment so this is
- 00:44:24basically the moment where readers
- 00:44:27understand what makes your character
- 00:44:28tick where you get to see their flaws
- 00:44:31you get to see their unique ways of
- 00:44:33approaching the world an approach I
- 00:44:35always like to use and i' I've
- 00:44:36recommended this to a lot of my clients
- 00:44:38and I've seen them take on the advice
- 00:44:39with great results here is that
- 00:44:42somewhere in the opening 10 to 20 pages
- 00:44:44of your story ideally you want your main
- 00:44:47character to make a decision that 95% of
- 00:44:50other characters wouldn't be making in
- 00:44:52that situation when you can do this
- 00:44:54effectively it makes readers sit up and
- 00:44:57pay attention because hopefully you're
- 00:44:58giving them through that unique decision
- 00:45:01a character they haven't necessarily
- 00:45:02seen before and so you're promising to
- 00:45:04them that they're going to get a new and
- 00:45:06interesting and novel experience as they
- 00:45:08go through your book with your hook
- 00:45:09you're also going to be showing your
- 00:45:10character living the lie so at this
- 00:45:12point if you're writing a positive Arc
- 00:45:14they're probably not too aware of the
- 00:45:15lie or its corrosive impacts on their
- 00:45:18existence if on the other hand you're
- 00:45:19writing a negative Arc you might be
- 00:45:21showing them living the truth at this
- 00:45:23point here because the LIE hasn't come
- 00:45:24along to tempt them yet you might also
- 00:45:26be hinting at the ghosts that is the
- 00:45:27sort of main event which is lingering in
- 00:45:29the character's mind uh and influencing
- 00:45:31the way they are behaving and in this
- 00:45:34part of the story your character is
- 00:45:36typically aware of their want and they
- 00:45:38might be making some moves towards
- 00:45:39chasing that want it's also critical
- 00:45:42it's so so critical here I cannot
- 00:45:44emphasize this next Point enough that
- 00:45:46you establish rooting interests so what
- 00:45:48do I mean by rooting interests well
- 00:45:50rooting interest is simply just your way
- 00:45:53to answer the reader's question which is
- 00:45:54always in the back of their mind when
- 00:45:56they are starting to read a new story
- 00:45:58and that question is why should I care
- 00:46:00why should I give a damn about these
- 00:46:02characters that I've just met and
- 00:46:04broadly speaking I've found that there's
- 00:46:06five main ways that you can establish
- 00:46:08rooting interests to pass the why should
- 00:46:10I care test for readers the first one is
- 00:46:13to show sympathy so demonstrate that
- 00:46:15your character has been unjustly
- 00:46:17punished by the world as a result we
- 00:46:19feel like they're a massive Underdog and
- 00:46:21so we begin to root for them to get out
- 00:46:23of this negative situation a classic
- 00:46:25example here is Harry Potter Harry
- 00:46:27starts the story as this unloved orphan
- 00:46:30who's living with an abusive aunt and
- 00:46:31uncle and cousin and so we feel a great
- 00:46:34degree of sympathy towards him and so
- 00:46:36that hook gives us a reason to care
- 00:46:39about Harry and so then when he starts
- 00:46:40to experience all these amazing things
- 00:46:42later in the story we celebrate that so
- 00:46:44much more because of where he started
- 00:46:46from the next character hook you can use
- 00:46:48is skill so perhaps you show a character
- 00:46:50who happens to be the master of their
- 00:46:52craft maybe they're an expert assassin
- 00:46:55or they're a really strong magician or
- 00:46:57there's something else that they're
- 00:46:58really really good at we find it so
- 00:47:00vicariously exciting to watch them excel
- 00:47:02in their field a great example of skill
- 00:47:05as a hook for a character here is Gavin
- 00:47:07guile in the black prison by Bren weeks
- 00:47:09so Gavin is the most powerful magician
- 00:47:12uh in the lands of this fantasy world
- 00:47:14and he can basically craft solid
- 00:47:15structures from light because he's so
- 00:47:17powerful and so skilled at his craft he
- 00:47:20does things that no one else can even
- 00:47:22attempt or even fathom there's a great
- 00:47:24scene earli on in the book where he
- 00:47:26builds this kind of skimmer device that
- 00:47:28goes across a sea and when it builds up
- 00:47:30enough speed it can sort of fly um over
- 00:47:33this ocean and it's this incredibly
- 00:47:35inventive feat and it's just a one of
- 00:47:38the the many things he actually does
- 00:47:39throughout that book which demonstrates
- 00:47:41his sort of unique capabilities around
- 00:47:44the magic here the third hook you could
- 00:47:45use is a personality hook so maybe your
- 00:47:47character has a unique voice a cutting
- 00:47:49sense of wit or some special way of
- 00:47:51seeing or perceiving or just moving
- 00:47:53through the world in general a great
- 00:47:55example of this is L lamura in the the
- 00:47:56lies of L lamura by Scott Lynch he's
- 00:47:59this very devious and charming and witty
- 00:48:01and sneaky thief and the story really
- 00:48:03enhances this with this sort of
- 00:48:05swashbuckling sense of Whimsy in its
- 00:48:07tone and well building let me read you a
- 00:48:09description from the prologue here that
- 00:48:11kind of perfectly expresses this I've
- 00:48:13got kids that enjoy stealing I've got
- 00:48:14kids that don't think about stealing one
- 00:48:16way or another and I've got kids that
- 00:48:18just tolerate stealing because they know
- 00:48:19they've got nothing else to do but
- 00:48:21nobody and I mean nobody has ever been
- 00:48:24hungry for it like this boy if he had a
- 00:48:26bloody gash across his throat and a
- 00:48:28physa was trying to sew it up lamora
- 00:48:30would steal the needle and thread and
- 00:48:32die laughing he steals too much doesn't
- 00:48:35that just make you want to read on about
- 00:48:37this guy who is crazy even by the
- 00:48:39standards of Thieves and conmen the next
- 00:48:41character Hook is progression the
- 00:48:43promise that this character is going to
- 00:48:45improve generally this takes one of two
- 00:48:47forms form number one is skill
- 00:48:50progression so we see the character not
- 00:48:52being particularly talented with their
- 00:48:53magic or something else and we get the
- 00:48:55promise that they are going to improve
- 00:48:57and get better at this craft over the
- 00:48:58course of the story the second type of
- 00:49:00progression is a moral progression we
- 00:49:02see the character behaving in a flawed
- 00:49:05or sort of incomplete way and we get the
- 00:49:07promise that they're going to become a
- 00:49:09better person over the course of the
- 00:49:10narrative or vice versa they're going to
- 00:49:12go down into some kind of tragic descent
- 00:49:14into madness instead and of course you
- 00:49:16can combine both of those here a great
- 00:49:18example here is Po from Kung Fu Panda he
- 00:49:20begins the story is this very chubby
- 00:49:22unfit out of shape person who doesn't
- 00:49:24really know anything about Kung Fu and
- 00:49:26when he is thrust into the role of being
- 00:49:28the Dragon Warrior he will have to learn
- 00:49:31to overcome these limitations uh and to
- 00:49:33become a truly great martial artist and
- 00:49:35then the last main character hook you
- 00:49:36can use here is a worthy cause so you
- 00:49:38have your character striving for a hard
- 00:49:40to- reach ideal uh particularly in a
- 00:49:43society where that ideal is maybe
- 00:49:45difficult to achieve and against
- 00:49:47pressure and conflict and resentment
- 00:49:49from maybe family friends loved ones and
- 00:49:51other influences around them usually the
- 00:49:53more opposition your character faces to
- 00:49:55achieve this worth cause the more
- 00:49:57compelling your character will feel a
- 00:49:59great example here is Viv the orc main
- 00:50:02character from Legends and lates by
- 00:50:03Travis bdry who I've actually
- 00:50:05interviewed on this channel as well so
- 00:50:06Viv is an orc who kind of retires from a
- 00:50:09life as a barbarian adventure to try to
- 00:50:11set up a coffee shop in this sort of
- 00:50:13fantasy city that has never heard of
- 00:50:15coffee before and so the town's people
- 00:50:16there have immense skepticism towards
- 00:50:19her but this Quest that she has this
- 00:50:20worthy cause she has to bring this
- 00:50:23coffee to this people and to create this
- 00:50:25new sort of community spirit in this
- 00:50:27town is something that creates a
- 00:50:29tremendous amount of sympathy for her
- 00:50:30and of course you can mix and match as
- 00:50:32many of these hooks as you like for
- 00:50:33example with lock lamora he has a
- 00:50:36terrible upbringing as an orphan so
- 00:50:38that's hook number one sympathy which
- 00:50:41led to him becoming a skilled Thief
- 00:50:43that's hook number two skill with a
- 00:50:45cheeky witty yet Charming sense of humor
- 00:50:48so that's hook number three who becomes
- 00:50:50an apprentice to an older wiser thief
- 00:50:53and con man who teaches him uh the way
- 00:50:55of the con which is uh hook number four
- 00:50:58progression and then he has to use these
- 00:51:00skills to get revenge against an even
- 00:51:02worse criminal after a job gone wrong
- 00:51:05which is hook number five so you can see
- 00:51:07here that Scott Lynch has basically used
- 00:51:09all five of these hooks here to make L
- 00:51:11lamur A really compelling character so
- 00:51:13let's see how the hook is manifested for
- 00:51:15Bilbo baggin's Arc In The Hobbit so we
- 00:51:18begin with Bilbo living a very
- 00:51:19comfortable life in his cozy Hobbit Hall
- 00:51:22um and we have this quote here from the
- 00:51:23story that demonstrates this well the
- 00:51:25Baggins never had any Adventure or did
- 00:51:27anything unexpected you could tell what
- 00:51:28a baggin would say on any question
- 00:51:30without the bother of asking him however
- 00:51:33this is a story of how a baggin had an
- 00:51:35adventure and found himself doing and
- 00:51:38saying things allog together unexpected
- 00:51:41how's that for a hook so we're seeing
- 00:51:43here hook number four progression right
- 00:51:45now the character is comfortable he's
- 00:51:47this home body he doesn't want to
- 00:51:48Adventure but we're going to see him go
- 00:51:51off on quite the adventure indeed if we
- 00:51:54look at best served cold and Co Shivers
- 00:51:56here we have Co Shivers arriving in
- 00:51:58steria hoping to start a new life in
- 00:52:01this country that he was promised would
- 00:52:03be kind of a bit of a paradise compared
- 00:52:05to the cold and bitter North where he
- 00:52:07grew up but it's not quite what he hoped
- 00:52:10for here's a quote from the book first
- 00:52:12things Shivers noticed as the boat
- 00:52:13wallowed in towards the wars it was
- 00:52:15nothing like as warm as he'd been
- 00:52:16expecting there's a spelling error I've
- 00:52:18said there life should be lives um it
- 00:52:20was nothing like as warm as he'd been
- 00:52:22expecting he'd heard the sun always
- 00:52:24Shawn in stor he was done with with war
- 00:52:27done with leading men to death he was
- 00:52:29set on being a better man I should
- 00:52:31mention both those quotes don't
- 00:52:32necessarily happen right after each
- 00:52:33other but they do happen in the opening
- 00:52:35couple of pages of shiver's chapter so
- 00:52:37you can see here we've actually got
- 00:52:38three hooks for Shivers operating we've
- 00:52:40got hook number one sympathy so you know
- 00:52:43he's coming to a place and it's not
- 00:52:44quite what he hoped for we've got hook
- 00:52:46number four progression that he's trying
- 00:52:47to become a better man and then we have
- 00:52:49hook number five worthy cause you know
- 00:52:51the worthy cause of trying to give up on
- 00:52:53his violent life and becoming a better
- 00:52:55person and then next looking at Ned
- 00:52:56starkk from A Game of Thrones we have
- 00:52:58him personally executing a traitor in
- 00:53:00the north he has this great quote that
- 00:53:03the man who passes the sentence should
- 00:53:04swing the sword if you would take a
- 00:53:06man's life you owe it to him to look
- 00:53:08into his eyes and hear his final words
- 00:53:10so note here as with all the characters
- 00:53:12I've just gone through how these opening
- 00:53:14hooks are immediately establishing where
- 00:53:17their arcs are starting at so here for
- 00:53:20Ned we've got hook number three
- 00:53:21personality and that might be an
- 00:53:23interesting one to say because he's not
- 00:53:24necessarily someone who's coming out
- 00:53:26with these super witty lines of dialogue
- 00:53:28or he's not particularly flamboyant but
- 00:53:30I would say his personality is
- 00:53:31interesting because in comparison to the
- 00:53:34corruption and the decadence of some of
- 00:53:36the other Lords in westos he just has
- 00:53:39this iron sense of honor to him that he
- 00:53:42will not break no matter what
- 00:53:43circumstance and as a result that
- 00:53:45personality makes him interesting to
- 00:53:46explore in this Cutthroat world and then
- 00:53:48we also have hook number five a worthy
- 00:53:50cause which is he is trying to live the
- 00:53:53best kind of honorable life he can even
- 00:53:55though this world around him is pretty
- 00:53:56Twisted in a lot of ways okay so this
- 00:53:59brings us to our Second Story point the
- 00:54:01inciting incident this is when your
- 00:54:03ordinary world that your characters
- 00:54:05usually exist in is disrupted by some
- 00:54:07kind of event that begins to set the
- 00:54:09story in motion so here the character is
- 00:54:12typically presented with a new challenge
- 00:54:15often the character refuses it at first
- 00:54:17so a character might be called to go to
- 00:54:19a particular Adventure or to take on a
- 00:54:21particular Mission and usually the
- 00:54:22character is saying no I don't want to
- 00:54:24be involved in that the reason for this
- 00:54:26is that the character is still stuck in
- 00:54:28their lie at this point in a positive
- 00:54:30Arc in a negative Arc of course the
- 00:54:32incident is actually going to be the
- 00:54:33thing that is introducing the lie and
- 00:54:36bringing this new source of Temptation
- 00:54:38in for your main character and in a flat
- 00:54:40Arc by comparison the incident is
- 00:54:42something that's going to be challenging
- 00:54:43the truth again in a flat Arc your main
- 00:54:46character is not really evolving that
- 00:54:47much in their beliefs it's much more
- 00:54:49focused on how the world is changing
- 00:54:51around them however what's important
- 00:54:53here with all of these arcs is that the
- 00:54:55incident the inciting uh event here is
- 00:54:58going to be subtly changing her
- 00:55:00awareness in some shape even if she
- 00:55:02doesn't necessarily admit that truth to
- 00:55:04herself at the very beginning so if we
- 00:55:07look at Bilbo wagons in The Hobbit
- 00:55:08Gandalf brings 13 dwarves to Feast at
- 00:55:11Bilbo's house to quote from the book as
- 00:55:13the saying The Hobbit felt something
- 00:55:15tukish woke up inside him and he wished
- 00:55:17to go and see the great mountains and
- 00:55:19hear the pine trees in the waterful so
- 00:55:21these dwarves are kind of stoking in
- 00:55:23Bilbo a little bit of a desire or
- 00:55:25curiosity around Adventure uring outside
- 00:55:27of his safe hobbit hole but then he
- 00:55:29thought of plundering dragons settling
- 00:55:31on his quiet Hill and kindling It All To
- 00:55:33Flames he shuttered and very quickly he
- 00:55:35was playing Mr baggin of Bag End
- 00:55:37Underhill again so once more the
- 00:55:40character's lie is being challenged here
- 00:55:43by the introduction of the truth but
- 00:55:44he's quickly rejecting him he is not
- 00:55:46willing to accept the truth that he
- 00:55:48wants to go out and be an adventurer he
- 00:55:50wants to cling to this lie that he needs
- 00:55:51to stay at home and just live this very
- 00:55:53sheltered life so what he actually does
- 00:55:56does here is he goes to sleep uh
- 00:55:57planning to refuse the adventure when he
- 00:56:00wakes up in the morning oh and I think I
- 00:56:01should mention here cuz I haven't said
- 00:56:03it already is that the dwarves are
- 00:56:05coming in trying to recruit Bilbo to go
- 00:56:07and help them steal treasure from a
- 00:56:09dragon essentially if we look at best
- 00:56:11served cold we have Shivers getting
- 00:56:13recruited by monzo makado for her sort
- 00:56:15of quest for revenge against the people
- 00:56:17who killed her brother initially he's
- 00:56:19very cautious because he doesn't want to
- 00:56:20go back to this violent life and he has
- 00:56:23these reservations that he asks with
- 00:56:24Monza take this dialog exchange here
- 00:56:27where he asks this man we're going to
- 00:56:28kill what did he do Monza said he got me
- 00:56:32to pay 50 scales for his corpse isn't
- 00:56:34that enough not for me says Shivers so
- 00:56:37you're one of them eh one of what one of
- 00:56:40those men that like reasons that need
- 00:56:42excuses you're a dangerous crowd you lot
- 00:56:45hard to predict so keep that in mind
- 00:56:47because at this point in the story
- 00:56:49Shivers is reluctant to go back towards
- 00:56:51a life of violence you're going to see
- 00:56:53that change as this story continues if
- 00:56:56we look at Ned Stark from A Game of
- 00:56:58Thrones we have the king and his re
- 00:57:00coming to Ned's home in Winterfell the
- 00:57:02king here reveals to Ned that his former
- 00:57:05hand of the king uh has died in perhaps
- 00:57:08suspicious circumstances who can tell uh
- 00:57:11and the King basically asks Ned to be
- 00:57:13the new hand of the king to quote from
- 00:57:15the story Robert was offering him a
- 00:57:17responsibility as large as the realm
- 00:57:19itself it was the last thing in the
- 00:57:21world he wanted he Being Ned in this
- 00:57:24case so this brings us to our story
- 00:57:26Point number three entering the new
- 00:57:28realm this is where your protagonist is
- 00:57:30taken from the Ordinary World and kind
- 00:57:32of thrust into the extraordinary world
- 00:57:34of your story it's important to note
- 00:57:35here that this uh departure from The
- 00:57:37Ordinary World to the extraordinary
- 00:57:39World it could be as literal as Harry
- 00:57:41Potter coming to Platform 9 and 3/4s and
- 00:57:44getting on the Hogwarts Express and
- 00:57:46going into the magical world or it could
- 00:57:48be more of a internal sense so for
- 00:57:51example in a detective story The
- 00:57:52Ordinary World of your detective would
- 00:57:55be solving rou crimes and homicides but
- 00:57:58the extraordinary world could come along
- 00:57:59where there's a crime that is just
- 00:58:01beyond their comprehension and they
- 00:58:02don't understand how it could have been
- 00:58:05committed there's no location change
- 00:58:07necessarily for that detective but it is
- 00:58:09undeniable that they they have now
- 00:58:11transitioned from the regular rules of
- 00:58:14their usual life into this situation
- 00:58:16where the rules are all different and
- 00:58:18everything's been turned Topsy Turvy so
- 00:58:20if we look at some examples from our
- 00:58:22characters here this occurs when Bilbo
- 00:58:24starts adventuring with the dwarves when
- 00:58:25shiv starts working with Mado to get
- 00:58:27revenge but he still has some moral
- 00:58:28reservations about violence at this
- 00:58:30point and then this also occurs when Ned
- 00:58:32goes south to King's Landing it's
- 00:58:34important to mention that with all of
- 00:58:36the sort of story structure moments I'm
- 00:58:38going through here even though I do give
- 00:58:40percentage markers to help guide you as
- 00:58:42you go through this process you do not
- 00:58:44need to adhere directly to these
- 00:58:46percentage markers it's far more about
- 00:58:48just the general shape and the general
- 00:58:50pattern of characters being challenged
- 00:58:53in particular ways and the the five
- 00:58:56questions of a character's Arc um being
- 00:58:58integrated through this particular
- 00:59:00pattern but you don't necessarily need
- 00:59:03to make sure that at the 12.5% Mark of
- 00:59:06your story The inciting incident is
- 00:59:07there if you look at something like The
- 00:59:09Hobbit for example the inciting incident
- 00:59:11kicks off much much sooner towards the
- 00:59:13start of the story and it kind of goes
- 00:59:15in a much more immediate fashion so with
- 00:59:17all of these story structure things it
- 00:59:19is useful to know where the rough sign
- 00:59:21posts are but when you're actually
- 00:59:22coming to writing the story you can
- 00:59:24adapt and mold these things as feels
- 00:59:26appropriate to your narrative so this
- 00:59:29brings us to the fourth story plot point
- 00:59:31the antagonist threatening your main
- 00:59:33character so this is where pressure is
- 00:59:35applied to the main character usually
- 00:59:37through some kind of introduction or key
- 00:59:39action from the antagonist again you may
- 00:59:41have introduced your antagonist way
- 00:59:43earlier in your story or this may
- 00:59:45actually be the moment where you are
- 00:59:47genuinely coming along to introduce the
- 00:59:49antagonist what's important here is that
- 00:59:51it's the first time we really feel the
- 00:59:53pinch and we really feel the threat so
- 00:59:55for example here with we've got Bilbo
- 00:59:56finding the one ring and playing Golem
- 00:59:58in a game of riddles just after sort of
- 01:00:01encountering a bunch of trolls it's a
- 01:00:03moment where you know he realizes like
- 01:00:05this is quite dangerous what I'm getting
- 01:00:06into here and maybe I'm a little bit
- 01:00:08over my head we have uh for best serve
- 01:00:11cold after an assassination attempt by
- 01:00:13makato leads to a very chaotic Slaughter
- 01:00:15at AB brothel card's House of
- 01:00:17Entertainment from memory with Shivers
- 01:00:19accidentally killing a ton of innocent
- 01:00:22bystanders he begins to question his
- 01:00:24role in mado's Revenge Quest and then
- 01:00:27for Ned this occurs for him when his
- 01:00:29investigation into the death of the
- 01:00:30previous hand of the king starts to put
- 01:00:33him at odds with the Lannisters and he
- 01:00:35begins to suspect that there's something
- 01:00:37unto W that's happening down in King's
- 01:00:39Landing this brings us to the midpoint
- 01:00:42Revelation so in a moment of personal
- 01:00:44Insight usually around the middle of
- 01:00:46your story your main character is
- 01:00:48finally beginning to understand the
- 01:00:50truth of their Ark however they don't
- 01:00:52fully let go of the lie so the reason I
- 01:00:54call this the midpoint Revelation is
- 01:00:56because this is kind of a a moment of
- 01:00:58epiphany that is going to hit your main
- 01:00:59character where they question the type
- 01:01:02of person they are the type of person
- 01:01:04they were in the past and the type of
- 01:01:05person they are potentially becoming in
- 01:01:07the future um in his fantastic book
- 01:01:10write your novel from the middle James
- 01:01:11Scott Bell talks about this as a mirror
- 01:01:14moment and there are many sort of movies
- 01:01:16and stories in particular where a
- 01:01:18character will literally be looking into
- 01:01:19a mirror at this point in the story just
- 01:01:21trying to figure out like who am I at
- 01:01:24this point it's often something where
- 01:01:26your character also shifts from being
- 01:01:28quite reactive to the events of the plot
- 01:01:30so up until this point they've just been
- 01:01:32buffered around by your antagonist or
- 01:01:34they're just been buffered from spot to
- 01:01:36spot but it's at this point in the
- 01:01:37midpoint where they resolve okay I
- 01:01:40actually need to take charge of my
- 01:01:41destiny I'm going to be way more
- 01:01:43proactive from here going forward and
- 01:01:44often when I'm plotting my story using
- 01:01:46these nine points here I will go in the
- 01:01:48order of working for my climax first to
- 01:01:51my inciting incident and then to my
- 01:01:53midpoint Revelation as the Third Kind of
- 01:01:55really big scene to nail from the
- 01:01:58beginning of my outling process and
- 01:01:59again I go over this in more detail in
- 01:02:01my fantasy outlining boot camp if you
- 01:02:03want to check that out so if we look at
- 01:02:04The Hobbit here for example the midpoint
- 01:02:06moment in this story occurs when Bilbo
- 01:02:08is all alone by himself in the merkwood
- 01:02:10forest um he's kind of gotten lost from
- 01:02:12the dwarves and he has to kill a giant
- 01:02:14spider all by himself in this moment he
- 01:02:16sees the truth he sees that he is indeed
- 01:02:19brave enough to do great Deeds to quote
- 01:02:21from the book somehow the killing of the
- 01:02:23giant spider all alone by himself in the
- 01:02:26dark without the help of the Wizard or
- 01:02:28the dwarves or anyone else made a great
- 01:02:30difference to Mr baggin he felt a
- 01:02:32different person and much fiercer and
- 01:02:34Bolder in spite of an empty stomach and
- 01:02:37you can see by the page count here this
- 01:02:39takes place pretty much smack bang
- 01:02:41around the 50% Mark of The Hobbit um or
- 01:02:43at least in my addition of it and it's
- 01:02:46exactly what I'm talking about here
- 01:02:47where you see this is a moment of
- 01:02:49epiphany where he realizes that he is
- 01:02:51potentially becoming someone else and
- 01:02:53that he actually can become this other
- 01:02:54person if we look at best served cold
- 01:02:57the midpoint moment here is particularly
- 01:02:59brutal in this story so after Shivers
- 01:03:01gets his eye burned out during uh
- 01:03:03torture he kind of reverts back to being
- 01:03:06very brutally animalistic and violent uh
- 01:03:09in his behavior to quote from the book
- 01:03:11Shivers weren't himself or maybe he
- 01:03:13finally was the pain had turned him mad
- 01:03:16and he liked it again look at that page
- 01:03:18count there this is pretty much right in
- 01:03:19the middle of this story he might have
- 01:03:21had one eye less than before but he saw
- 01:03:24things clearer the pain swept away all
- 01:03:26his doubts his fears his questions his
- 01:03:29choices his axe had all the answers he
- 01:03:32needed so at the beginning of the story
- 01:03:34and remember this is a negative
- 01:03:36character Arc the character is kind of
- 01:03:37going through this tragic downfall he
- 01:03:39wasn't really sure who he was he was
- 01:03:40trying to be this man of Peace he was
- 01:03:42trying to come to this new country and
- 01:03:43start over now in the midpoint he has
- 01:03:45had this flash of insight and Clarity
- 01:03:48and he has realized that he is a killer
- 01:03:51at his core and so his descent into
- 01:03:53darkness is well under away at this
- 01:03:56point if we look at at Game of Thrones
- 01:03:58the midpoint happens where Ned discovers
- 01:04:00that Joffrey isn't really Robert's son
- 01:04:02after listening to an argument between
- 01:04:04his daughters it strengthens his resolve
- 01:04:06to act against the Lannisters he tries
- 01:04:08to send his children home um with mixed
- 01:04:11results and it really makes him realize
- 01:04:14the true extent of the corruption and uh
- 01:04:16depravity that he's facing this brings
- 01:04:18us to story. 6 so more antagonist
- 01:04:21pressure I really should come up with a
- 01:04:22catch a name for this one it's the one
- 01:04:24where the name is is maybe not the
- 01:04:26strongest um but this is a moment where
- 01:04:27the protagonist's new understanding of
- 01:04:29the truth that they developed in the
- 01:04:31midpoint of your story is challenged by
- 01:04:33the antagonist really stepping out the
- 01:04:35intensity of their lie so if we look at
- 01:04:37The Hobbit this is where Frodo sneaks
- 01:04:39into the Lonely Mountain to steal
- 01:04:41treasure from SM the dragon and there's
- 01:04:43a really interesting moment right before
- 01:04:45he goes in which I want to read to you
- 01:04:46from the book so his truth is really
- 01:04:49tested remember in the midpoint he
- 01:04:51learned that he can be brave enough to
- 01:04:52do great Deeds like killing a giant
- 01:04:54spider but in this moment before he goes
- 01:04:56in to potentially confront a dragon
- 01:04:58here's what he thinks in the story at
- 01:05:00this point Bilbo stopped going on from
- 01:05:03there was the bravest thing he ever did
- 01:05:05he fought the real battle in the tunnel
- 01:05:06alone before he ever saw the vast danger
- 01:05:09that lay in weight moving on to best
- 01:05:11sered cold we see this manifested when
- 01:05:12Shivers keeps continuing to descend into
- 01:05:15a real amount of bitterness and anger um
- 01:05:18in his character the in particular
- 01:05:19there's a scene where he's at this great
- 01:05:21feast in this grand hall This
- 01:05:23Magnificent space and he reflects on how
- 01:05:25this man-made Wonder was the kind of
- 01:05:27thing he was promised uh and one of the
- 01:05:30reasons why he was motivated to go to
- 01:05:31steria in the first place but at this
- 01:05:33point he just doesn't care he just hates
- 01:05:35everyone there and he's just grunting
- 01:05:38and scowling and swearing at all the
- 01:05:40people around him to quote from the
- 01:05:41story he jerked his knife from the split
- 01:05:43wood the knife Monza had given him the
- 01:05:45first day they met back when he had it
- 01:05:47in mind to leave killing behind him and
- 01:05:49be a good man he could hardly remember
- 01:05:51what that had felt like so he's deep
- 01:05:54into the LIE now he's just into the
- 01:05:56tragic Arc that he's going through is
- 01:05:59even more complete if we look at this
- 01:06:00moment in a Game of Thrones here it's
- 01:06:02when the king is lying on his deathbed
- 01:06:05and Ned is grappling with telling him
- 01:06:07the truth about his son Joffrey and
- 01:06:09Joffrey's true parentage to quote from
- 01:06:11the book Robert Joffrey is not your son
- 01:06:14he wanted to say but the words would not
- 01:06:16come the agony was written too plainly
- 01:06:18across Robert's face he could not hurt
- 01:06:20him more take care of my children for me
- 01:06:23Robert said the words twisted in Ned's
- 01:06:26belly Like a Knife I shall guard your
- 01:06:29children as if they were my own he said
- 01:06:31slowly so here we see the immense power
- 01:06:34of the lie and that the power of the LIE
- 01:06:36is that you know in a dishonorable World
- 01:06:40sometimes you kind of need to be bending
- 01:06:41your Oaths if you want to achieve power
- 01:06:43so if Ned is breaking his Oaths in this
- 01:06:45moment and rejecting his truth his
- 01:06:47commitment to the Oaths that he sworn he
- 01:06:49could save the realm but he's not
- 01:06:51willing to do it still we are seeing
- 01:06:53immense pressure piled upon him um by
- 01:06:55the lie in this moment this brings us to
- 01:06:57story moment seven the darkest low at
- 01:07:00this point this is the most suffering
- 01:07:02your main character has faced so far and
- 01:07:04the lie if you're telling a positive
- 01:07:05change AR has never looked so strong we
- 01:07:08really worry that the LIE May triumph
- 01:07:10over your character and to give some
- 01:07:12examples of this in The Hobbit this is
- 01:07:14when smug goes on to attack Lake town uh
- 01:07:16and Bilbo really questions the
- 01:07:18consequences of Adventure and what he
- 01:07:20has done here in best serve cold there's
- 01:07:22a really brilliantly written sex scene
- 01:07:24between Shivers uh and carlot and it's
- 01:07:26an interesting scene because you
- 01:07:28initially think that Shivers and Mado
- 01:07:29are getting together right after this
- 01:07:31extremely bloody battle that they've
- 01:07:33both been through and they're kind of
- 01:07:34both like very horny after this thing uh
- 01:07:37it's a really well-written battle scene
- 01:07:38but what's interesting with this moment
- 01:07:40here is that it's actually a Twist and
- 01:07:42what we think is a encounter between
- 01:07:44Shivers and Mado is actually between
- 01:07:46Shivers and carlot and then Mado and
- 01:07:48Juke Rogan so these two totally
- 01:07:51different scenes that are sort of told
- 01:07:52in a really parallel um point of view
- 01:07:55shift back and forth between each other
- 01:07:56way and what's interesting here is it
- 01:07:58kind of cements shiver's extreme sort of
- 01:08:01violence his animalism and it's in this
- 01:08:04moment where he plans to basically
- 01:08:06betray makato after spending a lot a lot
- 01:08:09of the story you know initially sort of
- 01:08:10falling in love with her in many ways
- 01:08:12it's in this moment where he is becoming
- 01:08:14fully uh wrapped up within the lie if we
- 01:08:17look at a Game of Thrones here this is
- 01:08:19another good example of this sort of
- 01:08:20darkest low moment here we have Joffrey
- 01:08:23on the throne and Little Finger betay PR
- 01:08:25Ned um Ned is arrested as a traitor he's
- 01:08:28imprisoned in the Dungeons and so at
- 01:08:30about the 77% Mark of the story we have
- 01:08:32this quote the King dies Ned's dark
- 01:08:35thought and the hand is buried and quite
- 01:08:38often when you're actually writing this
- 01:08:39darkest low moment in your own fantasy
- 01:08:41novel this is like the time when most
- 01:08:43mentors are going to get killed in a
- 01:08:45fantasy book this is the moment where
- 01:08:47you know Obi-Wan dies and he's killed by
- 01:08:49Darth Vader I think if you are watching
- 01:08:51through Star Wars and you literally
- 01:08:52pause it at like the 75% Mark that's an
- 01:08:55hour 30 into the 2hour movie pretty sure
- 01:08:58that's around the same time when Obi-Wan
- 01:09:00is getting killed um so this is
- 01:09:01typically the moment where if you're a
- 01:09:02mentor character you want to be careful
- 01:09:05so this brings us to plot Point number
- 01:09:07eight the climax so this one's pretty
- 01:09:10self-explanatory It's the final
- 01:09:11confrontation between your protagonist
- 01:09:14and your antagonist what's important
- 01:09:16here is that either the lie or the truth
- 01:09:19will die at this point only one of these
- 01:09:20can survive at this moment so for
- 01:09:23example in The Hobbit we have Bilbo
- 01:09:24surviving the Battle of the Five Armies
- 01:09:27uh in best served Co we had this bloody
- 01:09:30Siege sequence where Shivers is
- 01:09:31cheerfully embracing his role as a
- 01:09:33brutal Savage then attempts to kill Mado
- 01:09:36and there's a great quote here from the
- 01:09:38story that expresses this Shivers stood
- 01:09:40there grinning his metal eyes shining in
- 01:09:42the halflight his smile widened scars
- 01:09:46twisting and he stretched his neck out
- 01:09:48one way then the other you can just see
- 01:09:50this full monstrous descent that he has
- 01:09:53gone through here in a Game of Thrones
- 01:09:56this is the sequence where Ned confesses
- 01:09:57to treason in public he's doing this to
- 01:10:00try to protect his daughters but he ends
- 01:10:01up having Joffrey order his execution
- 01:10:03instead and Ned Stark is killed and then
- 01:10:07lastly this brings us to the final Point
- 01:10:09uh in this sort of nine-point plot
- 01:10:10structure here the closing image this is
- 01:10:13where we see your protagonists living
- 01:10:15with their new truth and need if they
- 01:10:16went through a positive change Arc
- 01:10:18obviously if you're writing a negative
- 01:10:19Arc you flip it around here and we see
- 01:10:21them kind of living fully in the throws
- 01:10:23of the lie and typ typically a good
- 01:10:26closing image will merror the opening
- 01:10:28image of your story as a way to show
- 01:10:30change and transformation within your
- 01:10:31character so for The Hobbit for example
- 01:10:33we have Bilbo returning to the Shire but
- 01:10:36he was no longer quite respectable to
- 01:10:38quote from the book he took to writing
- 01:10:40poetry and visiting the elves and though
- 01:10:42many shook their heads and touched their
- 01:10:44foreheads and said poor old baggin and
- 01:10:46though few believed any of his tales he
- 01:10:48remained very happy to the end of his
- 01:10:51days so you can see him here living with
- 01:10:53his new Truth uh and his new need in
- 01:10:55best serve cold we have Shivers leaving
- 01:10:58steria and returning to the north he's
- 01:11:00basically embra embraced a life of
- 01:11:02violence and nihilism at this point now
- 01:11:04which is the LIE um and there's a great
- 01:11:06exchange between him and Mado towards
- 01:11:08the end of the story you lost yourself
- 01:11:10Shivers says M no I found myself might
- 01:11:14be he lost an eye down here in steria
- 01:11:16but he was a better man of that Shivers
- 01:11:18had no doubt a wiser man used to be he
- 01:11:21was his Own Worst Enemy now he was
- 01:11:23everyone else's so again he has gained a
- 01:11:26lot of clarity even as he has gone
- 01:11:28through this process of kind of losing
- 01:11:30his soul in a Game of Thrones the
- 01:11:33closing image here we have Ned Stark's
- 01:11:35death basically kicking off the war of
- 01:11:37the five Kings the realm is thrown into
- 01:11:39chaos and the LIE has quite clearly
- 01:11:42defeated the truth in this scenario so
- 01:11:44that was a really detailed look at how
- 01:11:46to write a great character Arc I hope
- 01:11:48you find it useful for your own fantasy
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