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how to write the opening paragraphs of
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the background of the study
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to begin with let us assume that you
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already have conducted a preliminary
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research on your chosen topic
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that is you already have read a lot of
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literature
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and gathered relevant information for
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writing the background of your study
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let us also assume that you already have
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identified
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the gap of your proposed research and
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have already developed
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the research questions and thesis
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statement
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if you have not yet identified the gap
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in your proposed research
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you might as well go back to our lesson
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and how to identify a research gap
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so we will just put together everything
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that you have researched into
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a background of the study assuming again
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that you already have the necessary
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information
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but in this lesson let's just focus on
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writing the opening paragraphs
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it is important to note at this point
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that there
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are different styles of writing the
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background of the study
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hence what i will be sharing with you
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here is not just
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the only way of writing the background
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of the study
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as a matter of fact there is no
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one-size-fits-all style of writing this
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part of the researcher thesis
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at the end of the day you are free to
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develop your own
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however whatever style it would be
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it always starts with a plan which
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structures
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the writing process into stages or steps
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and the steps that i will share with you
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here are just some of the most effective
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ways of writing the background of the
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study in research
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so let's begin it is always a good idea
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to begin the background of your study by
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giving an
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overview of your research topic
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this may include providing a definition
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of the key concepts of your research
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or highlighting the main developments of
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the research topic
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let us suppose that the topic of your
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study is
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the lived experiences of students with
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mathematical anxiety
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here you may start the background of
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your study with a discussion on the
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meaning
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nature and dynamics of the term
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mathematical anxiety
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the reason for this is too obvious
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mathematical anxiety
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is a highly technical term that is
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specific to mathematics
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hence this term is not readily
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understandable to non-specialists in
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this field
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so you may write the opening paragraph
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of your background of the study
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with this mathematical anxiety
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refers to the individual's unpleasant
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emotional mood responses when confronted
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with
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a mathematical situation
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since you do not invent the definition
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of the term mathematical anxiety
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then you need to provide a citation to
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the source of the material from which
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you are quoting
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for example you may say mathematical
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anxiety
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refers to the individual's unpleasant
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emotional
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mood responses when confronted with a
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mathematical situation
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elliot 2020 and then
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you may proceed with a discussion on the
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nature
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and dynamics of the term mathematical
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anxiety
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you may say lou specifically identifies
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some of the manifestations of this type
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of anxiety
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which include but not limited to
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depression
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helplessness nervousness and fearfulness
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in doing mathematical and numerical
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tasks
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after explaining to your readers the
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meaning
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nature and dynamics as well as some
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historical development if you wish to
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of the term mathematical anxiety you may
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now proceed to showing the problem or
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gap of the study
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as you may already know the research gap
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is the problem that needs to be
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addressed in the study
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this is important because no research
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activity is possible
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without the research gap
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let us suppose that your research
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problem or gap
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is mathematical anxiety can negatively
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affect
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not just the academic achievement of the
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students
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but also their future career plans
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and total well-being also
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there are no known studies that deal
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with the mathematical anxiety
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of junior high school students in new
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zealand
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with this you may say if left unchecked
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as shapiro claims this problem will
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expand and create
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a total avoidance pattern on the part of
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the students
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which can be expressed most visibly in
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the form of cutting classes
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and habitual absenteeism
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as we can see this will negatively
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affect
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the performance of students in
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mathematics
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in fact the study conducted by
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luttenberger and wimmer
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revealed that the outcomes of
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mathematical anxiety
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do not only negatively affect the
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students performance in math related
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situations
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but also their future career as
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professionals
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without a doubt therefore mathematical
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anxiety
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is a recurring problem for many
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individuals
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which will negatively affect the
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academic success and future
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career of the student
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now that you already have both explained
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the meaning
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nature and dynamics of the term
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mathematical anxiety
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and articulated the gap of your proposed
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research
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you may now state the main goal of your
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study
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and you may say hence it is precisely in
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this context
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that the researcher aims to determine
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the lived experiences
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of those students with mathematical
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anxiety
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in particular this proposed thesis
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aims to determine the lived experiences
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of the junior high school students in
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new zealand
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and identify the factors that caused
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them to become
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disinterested in mathematics
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please note that you should not end the
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first paragraph of your background of
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the study
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with the articulation of the research
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goal
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you also need to articulate the thesis
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statement which usually comes after the
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research goal
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as is well known the thesis statement
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is the statement of your argument or
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contention in the study
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it is more of a personal argument or
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claim
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of the researcher which specifically
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highlights the possible contribution of
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the study
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for example you may say
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the researcher argues that there is a
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need to determine the lived experiences
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of these students with mathematical
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anxiety
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because knowing and understanding the
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difficulties and challenges that they
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have encountered
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will put the researcher in the best
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position
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to offer some alternatives to the
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problem
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indeed it is only when we have performed
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some kind of a diagnosis
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that we can offer practicable solutions
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to the problem
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and in the case of the junior high
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school students in new zealand who are
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having mathematical anxiety
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determining their lived experiences as
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well as
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identifying the factors that cause them
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to become disinterested in mathematics
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are the very first steps in addressing
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the problem
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now if we combine the bits and pieces
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that we have written
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we can now come up with the opening
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paragraphs of your background of the
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study
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which reads mathematical anxiety refers
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to the individual's
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unpleasant emotional mood responses when
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confronted with a mathematical situation
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elliot 2020 liu
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specifically identifies some of the
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manifestations of this type of anxiety
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which include but not limited to
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depression
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helplessness nervousness and fearfulness
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in doing mathematical
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and numerical tasks
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if left to rule and checked as shapiro
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claims
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this problem will expand and create a
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total avoidance pattern
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on the part of the students which can be
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expressed most visibly in the form of
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cutting classes
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and habitual absenteeism as we can see
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this will negatively affect the
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performance of students in mathematics
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in fact the study conducted by
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luttenberger and wimmer
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revealed that the outcomes of
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mathematical anxiety
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do not only negatively affect the
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student's performance in math related
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situations
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but also their future career as
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professionals
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without a doubt therefore mathematical
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anxiety
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is a recurring problem for many
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individuals
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which will negatively affect the
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academic success
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and future career of the student hence
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it is precisely in this context
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that the researcher aims to determine
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the lived experiences of those students
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with mathematical anxiety
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in particular this proposed thesis
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aims to determine the lived experiences
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of junior high school students in new
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zealand
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and identify the factors that caused
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them to become disinterested in
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mathematics
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the researcher argues that there is a
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need to determine the lived experiences
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of these students with mathematical
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anxiety
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because knowing and understanding the
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difficulties and challenges that they
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have encountered
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will put the researcher in the best
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position to offer
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some alternatives to the problem indeed
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it is only when we have performed some
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kind of a diagnosis
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that we can offer practicable solutions
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to the problem
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and in the case of the junior high
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school students in new zealand
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who are having mathematical anxiety
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determining their lived experiences
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as well as identifying the factors that
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caused them to become disinterested in
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mathematics
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are the very first steps in addressing
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the problem
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now as we can see we can find in the
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first paragraph five essential elements
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that must be articulated in the
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background of the study
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namely first a brief discussion in what
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is known about the topic under
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investigation
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second an articulation of the research
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gap
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or problem that needs to be addressed
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third
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what the researcher would like to do or
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aim to achieve in the study
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or the research goal fourth
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the thesis statement that is the main
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argument or claim of the paper
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and lastly the major significance
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or contribution of the study to a
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particular discipline
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so that's how you write the opening
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paragraphs of your background of the
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study
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the next lesson will talk about writing
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the body of the background of the study